‘Choice To Choose’

Free will is given - use wisely🌹

‘Choice To Choose ‘

I choose
Honesty

You choose
Lies

I choose
Freedom

You choose
Ties

The unending
Cord
Lost in amongst
Untouched
Words

Seems
Absurd
Remains
Unheard-

I choose
The source

You choose
Confusion

Lost in
The doldrums
Never ending
Problem solving
Not quite evolving
To the truth
Of the mind
Lost in the
Ticking
Of time-

Can’t be reversed

Or rehearsed

Becoming a type
Of ‘a curse’

When your GPS
Is not in course

Much remorse

Resulting in divorce-
Divorce
From the self

Stolen and hidden
Wealth
Affecting
Mental health-

This bigger
Than wealth

Come back
Into self-
Self
In a stream
Don’t
Rob your
Own dream-

Flow
From the start
Unhinge
Hidden parts of
The heart-

Why did you
Depart

Lost and forlorn
Since you were
Born

Go back on
The tide
Every emotion
You need to
Ride
To be able to
Search
Deep inside

Abandon

The lover of
Pride

It’s all
By your
Side-

Make a choice

Raise your voice

Return to self

Find your riches
And wealth.

Kelly Fagelund - Gjersoe
26 August 2018

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I love the way this message feels like a worm wiggling along thru light & dark tunnels (I love contrasts in writing, which reflect contrasts of life) -- your poem is full of unexpected possibilities. Sometimes we love a person but we don't love their choices. I'm afraid a person's choices are the best indicator of things to come, so it's not like we can ignore this aspect of another person! Your poem explains why it's a good idea to observe choices & what these choices might mean (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

You are so right- all have choices which lead us to where we land up - can always change our choices start over- up to us- hugs being returned- Thankyou x 🌹

[Ardra]

Somehow being true to yourself and your feelings is only thing we can do....if we cannot listen to our heart beat and understand ....and be true to self ..then such life waste of time....
Beautiful words Kelly...as always wise and sweet

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou my dearest kind soul- to listen and hear is the main thing and to listen to understand not just to comment- Thankyou for your kind words🌹

[Pete]

actions have consequences. a lot to be weighed in your words. an awesome thing, not to be taken lightly. reminds me of a bit of Shakespeare, "To thine own self be true." this was a stark read ... :)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Oh deep soul you are- so glad you enjoyed it- yes the truth is sometimes harsh and bitter but always opens new doors and paths- Thankyou for your grace upon my page🌹

[Onlyme]

The true meaning of oneself, being true to you. Deep and thoughtful, expressed and delivered with such grace.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

The truth sets free- lies bind- choose life not death- Thankyou for commenting much appreciated🌹

[Onlyme]

Love your deep thinking and wise words. Thoughts In Time. 💐♥️

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou kindly🌹

[lightsong]

if it's You, then You are one of the most purest, special, deep, intelligent, powerful, beautiful human beings, and no, not all like You my dear, nor all can do it alone by their owns, and some don't like to reach a solution, but to keep struggling in the confusion, it gives them a certain kind of fake peace, and they don't want to get deeper into meditating inside one's mind and inner, because it will be SO tiring for them, they whom don't know how even to do it.

You say Your voice loud and clear, strong and sincere, with sheer power, giving them a proof if they want to see and the proof is but "You" my dearest.

don't despair, don't be sad from all these kinds of people around You, it's tiring dragging Your energy, I know, believe me I know, and nothing better but to keep Your solitude to Your own self.

Sending You many many happy hugs and lots of Love🤗💗😘

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Oh Thankyou my beautiful friend much love and comfort straight back to you- I do agree but us stubborn angels need to lead by example of love and never give up on the lost broken and lonely- if I made a mark touched a soul then I’ve done my job- hopefully through us they’ll eventually see the light🌹❤️🦋🌈💫

[lightsong]

I really don't know how You spoke each single words here as if You've stepped inside my heart and said them!

do I need to say if I agree with You?! You KNOW that I COMPLETELY WHOLLY agree with You! do Your purpose until the end my dearest ✨🌹✨

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

You send shivers straight through me with your words- yes love conquers all ...blessings in abundance ❤️

[lightsong]

abounding Love 💗💗💗💗💗

[Relic]

Quite often relationships turn into whirlpools and someone gets pulled under. Later we ask ourselves what we could have done differently. And in other cases, we wonder why we got involved in the first place. A broken heart never feels good.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Yes so true but then some people need to learn how to love and to be shown the way - some have never had the right person or opportunity to allow them- choices- the only thing we can be sure of is change and hopefullly for the better- Thankyou for taking time much appreciated🌹

[jacob erin-cilberto]

once we lose ourselves in one way or another....we seem to lose all of those close to us...they are saddened and wish for our return...but often if it happens at all, it happens too late.
j.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

As we say in South Africa- jammer kom te laat- sorry comes too late- don’t know y people don’t learn but only when so much damage might have been done - so silly- Thankyou for reading- never say never- it’s a very long time🌹

[Chris Shaw]

It's all about choice, and unfortunately some people can't help themselves, they keep making bad choices. Time and time again regardless of what friends and family say. There is a lesson here, if you have choice, then plan to use it wisely.Good read Kelly.

Chris

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou - yes our choices take us to where we are today🌹

[Chris Shaw]

Have a good day yourself.

[wordman]

choices,sometimes we make the wrong ones and sometimes we fail to make one in which case is the wrong one again,,divorse works on your mind,loss of self i guess is the worse

some women seems to always demand truth,but sometimes i think that`s not the best policy,sometimes we hold back the truth to protect,sometimes we don`t even know the truth,our feelings overwhelm us

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Oh dear I should help that you are not overwhelmed that you cannot speak from the heart everyone should be able to express how they feel and think no matter what- Thankyou for comment🌹

[wordman]

you are welcome

[Vivian Gospel]

Hi kelly. Choices make us or break us. This is true.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

You are so right- Thankyou for stopping by🌹

[Vivian Gospel]

You are welcome. I have written some poems too.