‘Sanity Of Humanity’

‘Sanity Of Humanity’

A Poem by ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹
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We lose out on much by judging and putting more energy in worrying about others ways and lives- let them be thats how they are and meant to be for now- look deeper at yourself- u losing out🌹

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‘Sanity Of Humanity’

I look at the candle and see
A flickering light- its asking me- why is it that so much of our lives we only see others lives and it is not even ‘me’- we lose out on the meaning- its because we’re not seeing the truth of the meaning, our thoughts - they have scattered- into others lives,
Others strifes- it’s hurt your wife or your sight- it’s theirs to bare- for them to see- not you or me-

The flame it flickers and glows- it shows that so much is lost at a selfish cost of trying to change others games- thats not written in your name-

You see their faults, you think that change will suit their names but let them be, its the truth they need to see-

We say- don’t do this
- you must do that
As if we have a robotic ‘cat’

The truth you see its not
you or me- just let them be

The things they do, aren’t up to you, it’s them themselves that choose and let out the things they need to share- we just need to be there-

Don’t try and change the things they do- if its not your way - save it for another rainy day

Advice can be twice as nice in a gentle cheer, its soft on the ear, but opinions and statements- create a desperate state where nobody wants to listen- even though the candle glistens, shouting please listen- its their way in so doing expressing whats needed not to be judged or felt unneeded-

So lets look deep inside, that flame see what hides-

We lose out on so much of a person - we worsen the situation at times-

Let’s just be - you and me
And lets look deeper and see the true meaning of
Humanity within so called sanity..🌹

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
27 January 2019

© 2019 ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹


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we are different individuals, what applies to me might not apply to You, this is a fact that many don't realize, of curse I agree with Your profound beautiful thoughts like always dear Kelly, specially when said that what You are talking about doesn't mean no to give advice or help, but it's in the way they are offered and the absolute fact that You can't change or help someone whom are don't in the first place wanting to help their selves. now please lit more candles 😉 ✨🕯✨🧘🌹

Posted 5 Months Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

5 Months Ago

Mwah🌹thankyou for sharing your thoughts on my piece-im humbled🌹
distinctly different & one to ponder upon.. N

Posted 6 Months Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Months Ago

Pondering has a purpose...thankyou🌹
Neville Pettitt

6 Months Ago

I wonder as I ponder what she feeds it on. the porpoise, that is.. :)
we lose ourselves in others...or in how we think we need to be or should be according to those in charge...but we need to be in charge of ourselves..and anyway...sanity? what exactly is that?
varying degrees and definitions ...i am not sure what it is...
really good poem...to ponder it and ourselves...
j.

Posted 6 Months Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Months Ago

Thankyou for sharing - yes there are some things well just never quite understand but i do believe n.. read more
This one will resonate with so many and definitely a wise reminder to "just be"
You are absolutely right when you pen "we lose out on so much of a person" whether it be of ourselves or another when acceptance is not present. We are all so unique, and the true meaning and beauty lies deep within, its present.

Posted 6 Months Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Months Ago

True- the deeper the better 🌹
The worLet’s just be - you and me
"And lets look deeper and see the true meaning of
Humanity within so called sanity.ld running loco and us, who want the world to slow down. Can't do much."
The above line. True and wise. Thank you dear Kelly for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote


Posted 6 Months Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Months Ago

Thankyou for reading🌹
Coyote Poetry

6 Months Ago

You are welcome dear Kelly.
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Months Ago

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Your writing needs more than one reading because your thoughts are rather like a rolling stone, you gather more as you 'voice' your thoughts. Reading slowly, carefully, there's wisdom and kindness, even more, the truest meaning of respect. It's so easy to make judgements, to want to change other's ways because they're different from one's own. Perhaps looking into self, seeing own flaws as well as good traits should help to be less arrogant more empathic, perhaps. In fact your fine writing seems to suggest that as the core of your final three lines:

Let's just be - you and me... And lets look deeper and see the true meaning of .. Humanity within so called sanity.

Posted 6 Months Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Months Ago

Thankyou Emma Joy for your lovely words and understanding and yes- we are all different in ays of ou.. read more
emmajoy

6 Months Ago

Was more than happy to read, understand and leave you a few words. :)
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Months Ago

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‘Thoughts In Time’🌹
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

Essex, United Kingdom



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Writing poems of passing thoughts in time where time unwinds many thoughts and emotions all set for a certain place in time. more..

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