‘Games’

‘Games’

A Poem by ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹
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Where hearts break and are torn apart🌹

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‘Games’

Games of the

Heart

Breaking

The very part
Of you that’s
Meant to be

Pure

And

True-

Tearing emotions
Apart

Poisoning
The part
Where
Life

Is held

But begged
Borrowed

To be sold

Turning all the
Love the heart
Holds

Cold-

Oh what i’d
Give

To we worthy
Of a heart of
Gold-

Never cheating

Lying

Turning cold

Oh how they
Sell their souls

Emotionless

Cold-

Oh what a story
They’ll soon
Tell

When the heart
They hold
Freezes

Becomes distant
Old-

When karma
Eventually
Starts to

Unfold.🌹

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
29/4/2019.

© 2019 ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹


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Vin
it has a rhyme- enjoyed.

All my love

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Weeks Ago

So glad it made you smile🌹thankyou🌹
Thought the rhythmic pace of the poem was like the beating of a heart, a great read, thanks for sharing

Posted 1 Month Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Month Ago

Thankyou for reading and comment I really appreciate it🌹
Awesome, very awesome and once again holds a lot of truth,
You are a very talented writer, I enjoyed these poems I have read from you.

Posted 1 Month Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Month Ago

Oh bless you very kind and I’m glad you enjoyed🌹
I really like this poem . I like how raw and vulnerable you sound. Love is tricky but well worth it. Keep writing pretty poetry I think it help people. What was your inspiration? Were you in a relationship recently?

Posted 2 Months Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Months Ago

I’m a single mom of two and my inspiration is every day life my experiences my failures my learnin.. read more
the form you created catches my eye without reading a word .. like it a lot .. i think the rhyming and repeating lends strength and a feel of familiarity in reading ... an age old theme .. we do reap what we sow .. but your focus on what is good, honest and pure and the tragedy of its loss when we make decisions that turn that heart bit by bit into something cold and dishonorable ... you got me thinking Thoughts ;)))))))))) love on ya!
E.

Posted 2 Months Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Months Ago

Love returned in abundance- coated in blessings- thankyou🌹
Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

:) ........................
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Months Ago

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
This is such a beautiful poem. It tells that even if one cheats in a relationship Karma is gonna get them. So no point on getting revenge by yourself.
One will always get what they deserve.

Posted 2 Months Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Months Ago

True are your words and yes we can stand back and watch without wishing bad on anyone- God knows🌹
"The part
Where
Life

Is held"

these words just hit and stuck, life is held where love is, when there is no love there is no life, no warmth, no heartbeat, nothing... only coldness and stones, when that part is poisoned with negative emotions it would be the same as the hurt and pain from a breaking heart. and yes Karma will always have its own way to set and play.

Posted 2 Months Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Months Ago

And so say all of us- to think people would Choi’s death over life?? Never be able to understand b.. read more
I do believe in karma, and I love your poem.
What comes around goes around and they will get theirs


Posted 2 Months Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Months Ago

True words and sadly yes people need to think and feel deeper - thankyou for popping by🌹
Beautiful, poignant. Apparently freeform at first blush, but possessed of internal rhythms that gave it a particular cadence as I read it to myself.
The beauty of the form created a contrast with the poem's sadness, making it... bittersweet. Hope is a cruel mistress isn't it? So much of our dreams seem predicated on apparent impossibilities.
Well-written.
Strength and peace to you

Posted 2 Months Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Months Ago

Thankyou for your wonderful words- yes I have a style of my own that not many accepted at first but .. read more
Landred Vhael

2 Months Ago

Pssh, I think we've all kissed hope's lips.
Both bitter and sweet they are, and there's alway.. read more
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Months Ago

Yes we find what we seek 🌹
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I feel this one,and having been cheated on often i do hope karma is a real thing and hope for my happy ending.
Nice work.

Posted 3 Months Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

3 Months Ago

Thankyou and yes we are our own happy ending via the choices we make - all shall be well🌹

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Essex, United Kingdom



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Writing poems of passing thoughts in time where time unwinds many thoughts and emotions all set for a certain place in time. more..

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