‘First Time Or Nothing’

At first you don’t succeed ...does it all crumble ...🌹

‘First Time Or Nothing’

First impressions
Last a lifetime
And
Actions....

If you miss the mark
From the start
Does it all
Fall apart

If not complete
That which you
Seek
Short of the mark
Does it all
Fall apart...

Is it all or nothing
You can try
Again
But
It never seems
The same

What a silly game

It can bring shame

Or turn into fame
It’s all riding
On your name

Oh what a shame
Is it all a game

Does it start
To crumble
If your aim
Misses the mark

Bullseye in the
Centre
Is it balance
Or just the means
To show
What it all seems

Maker of dreams

Swimmer of streams

Chances come
And go

Choices show

But only the heart
Truly knows
The path
You should go

It’s a path
From the start
To what must
Be

A circle evolving
From a heart
Dissolving

It’s all a revolving
Un resolving
Circle

Spinning out of
Into nothing

It’s what we see
What comes to be

It’s the mark
That’s imprinted
On the heart

Right from the

Start...🌹

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
17/08/2019

Reviews

[R. Bagby]

It reads so peaceful yet simultaneously aching. Love it.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou🌹

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes i just hate the idea of first impressions...to me that is the idea that i will make a judgment immediately of a person or an emotion and stick to it no matter what...not giving a chance to get to really know the person and reconsider...
j.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

I was just wondering if you don’t quite hit the mark right at first do we really ever get chance to get it right through time and lessons learnt...just never the same...🌹

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Love the rhyme in this well played I enjoyed the read thanks 🙏

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for taking time🌹