‘Happiness’

Internal brightness🌹

‘Happiness’

Happiness is that
Space in time
Where the spirit
Shines
Brings thoughts
And hearts
In line
Light shining
Bright
No space
For sadness
Or
Madness
Only gladness
Of soul

Beauty
Within
A spotless
Fish bowl.

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
11/10/2019

Reviews

[light and ashes]

I was pleasantly surprised with this. It drew me in immediately, and I actually found it to be unique and gorgeous. Thank you for the excellent read.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for the wonderful review🌹

[light and ashes]

You're welcome :)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

[light and ashes]

♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Always let the beauty
within shine like a wildfire.

Such beautiful happy
positive words very nicely
said. 😊💗💙

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

You are so right..thankyou🌹

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're welcome 😊 👏

[An owl on the moon]

What beautiful flowing thoughts of joy. Yes, internal brightness, the glow of the fireplace in the soul... keeping it always burning in its beauty. Wishing more and more to experience this place where the spirit shines.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

It shines right here..brightly ..thankyou🌹

[R.E. Ray]

"Beauty within a spot fish bowl" is the resounding phrase here. We see bright sun rays streaming through the glass bowl, colors bursting, full of life, no shadows, nothing to hide. All is perfect in that space... heart and fish bowl. :)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

You are so right ...on sight..thankyou🌹

[Kelly Scheppers]

"No space
For sadness
Or
Madness
Only gladness
Of soul

Beauty
Within
A spotless
Fish bowl."

How poetically it reads - and well suited to stand on its own merit!

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou kindly for stopping by🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

Difficult to keep a fish bowl clean dear Kelly. Polluted mind can steal the eyes and the heart.
"Beauty
Within
A spotless
Fish bowl."
I did like the above words. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Lol exactly ...but if we believe it we can see it ..not just swimming around ...🌹

[wordman]

lol,is there such a thing

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Now who’s looking at the darkness instead of the light???🌹

[wordman]

oh well,just had a moment i guess

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Lol...smile

[wordman]

you brought me to my senses

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Lol...eventually...glad to be of service 🌹

[wordman]

yes,you`re welcome trick or treat

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Surprise me...🌹

[wordman]

chocolate,nah trick,lol

[John the Baptist]

Nicely rhymed, sparely worded, both qualities I admire. The content is also excellent, because we all need to define what happiness means to us.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Merci..🌹🌹🌹🌹

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh my....the metaphor of the spotless fish bowl...it seems we live our lives in one...and everyone can see our ups and downs...
how we swim in heartache or happiness.
I always wonder what they are thinking as we stare at them...
j.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Lost souls swimming in a fish bowl...I wonder as well if aliens look at me what would they see ..what I look like in the mirror or is that not actual what I see??🌹

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i think they would see the beautiful soul of a poet!

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

[Chris Shaw]

A beautiful state to achieve. It isn't always easy, but once you have climbed to the heady heights of happiness, you never forget what it feels like. A spiritual write Kelly and much enjoyed.

Chris

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou and yes hopefully it doesn’t take to long to be achieved for some 🌹