‘Hold Me’

‘Hold Me’

A Poem by ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹
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In the arms of love....

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‘Hold Me’

Oh
Hold me
Like you did
Last night

Cocooned
Within your
Arms

No magic charms
No wands
Need wave

It’s all
Within
Our deepest
Connection

In love
Itself
Does
Crave.

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
04/03/20

© 2020 ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹


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Touch can be the best elixir, as your poem shows. Simply stated to reflect the idea that there's no adornment needed, just a hug. One reason I do (((HUGS))) on my postings is becuz there's a craving to transcend the distance. Your poem may be about lovers, but it applies to everyone reaching out & trying to hold each other (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


Magic, safety, comfort, bliss, one seeks them and finds them in a lover’s embrace. The heart and spirit are reinforced. One finds oneself. This simple, heartfelt plea says it all.

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

True are your words...two spirits become one ....such bliss it is...🌹🌹
AJNJ

1 Year Ago

Indeed, there’s nothing like togetherness. Even a shared cup of tea holds magic. 🤗
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

So very true...that’s a magical cup of tea...🌹
all You poems must be collected in a book to be read under a dim light at the early night hours, they bring the warm, blissful, comfort and beautiful feelings, filling one's heart with hope, ease and love ✨💕✨

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

Ahhhh Thankyou my loveliest light of life....and yours to be treasured and kept close at heart alway.. read more
There is nothing better than feeling loved in someone’s arms and when they leave you just long for them to return. Beautiful poem :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

No there isn’t...Thankyou for stopping by🌹
Beautiful .... Reminds me of a time when I was in love

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

Thankyou...memories are to be treasured🌹
A beautiful connection of two lovers in a private moment. Quality time together

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

Moments that nothing else can replace...thankyou🌹
How beautiful those hearts that always sing of love. People who find such people to love are really so lucky. Keep writing about it always.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

Thankyou...in love is the truth and the truth is love🌹
A simple and to the point poem. Love is a powerful feeling indeed and you displayed what's really important.

Nicely done. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

Oh Thankyou...sometimes it can only be said the way it’s felt and sometimes simplicity it deeper t.. read more
 Relic

1 Year Ago

Well said.
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
a comfort zone in love showing and feeling emotion

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

Thankyou Mr love himself...merci🌹🌹
 wordman

1 Year Ago

ain`t you just sweet,you`re welcome
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
a kiss or a hug...sometimes the most intimate communication...and the one that might show us the true connection of two people and the love they share, whether as lovers or just special friends.
j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Year Ago

Oh and that space of comfort...transparent soft and so beautiful...thanking you🌹🌹

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‘Thoughts In Time’🌹
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Essex, United Kingdom



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