‘Edit Your Love’

‘Edit Your Love’

A Poem by ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹
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Loves perfect place....🌹

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‘Edit Your Love’

Oh

How I’d love
To edit
Your

Love

For me

I’d place
Each

Common

Full stop

In the
Perfect

Place

It’s meant
To

Be.

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
10/06/20

© 2020 ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹


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Said would read and am thinking such a variety of thoughts. deep love and desire entwined is as near as i can immediately get. Immensely rich language, quite graphic fulfilment Surely asking and giving helps make things zizzle whereas silence is too much comfort but, not quite enough fizz! Strangely added though, a pensiveness with touches f intimacy and determination. Seems to be all things combined but not sure which takes the uoper hand!

(adjusted review)

Posted 1 Month Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Weeks Ago

Ohhh in the knowing we need not be reminded...sending so much love joy comfort and all things good �.. read more
emmajoy

2 Weeks Ago

Such a lovely message from you, many THANK YOUS.
Keep safe, take great care. Virtual hug, as.. read more
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Day Ago

Much love returned ...all things bright and beautiful always🌹
What beautiful thoughts, filled with warmth and wonder. A writer's love, letting the words find their place, and arranging them until everything is absolute bliss.

Posted 1 Month Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Day Ago

Everything eventually finds its place edited in the right time and space...with loves eternal grace .. read more
great title says i .... edit your love indeed .. and we certainly should :) both our own and our lovers' .. open and honest talk in foreplay and during and after will go a long way ;) ...such a playful sensual fun read for me ..she's a corker for sure .. men need lots of guidance says i ... we do well to listen .. love this poem .. i think it has its place in the Book of Solomon or the Ananga Ranga .. or Kama Sutra :)))))))))))))))))))))))) great job Thoughts ... glad i did not miss it! love and happiness always!
E.

Posted 1 Month Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Month Ago

Ohhhh Thankyou for your wonderful words and such joy in your heart...you warm my heart with a smile... read more
A case here Kelly of wishing things were different. I think many of us from time to time would like to carry out a few relationship edits. A thoughtful piece. Hope you are keeping well.

Chris

Posted 2 Months Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Month Ago

True are your words...much love to you ...hope and trust all is well🌹🌹
On the surface this may seem like a sweet loving message, but I'm catching something a little snarky here. We humans are so bad about this very thing . . . wanting someone's love, but then not being satisfied with the form it takes. Love how this can be taken any number of contrasting ways (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Months Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Months Ago

Thanking you🌹🌹🌹
Editing another's love for us...Wishful but so beautiful. This is a fantastic poem for me.

Posted 2 Months Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Months Ago

Thankyou and yes...so beautiful🌹🌹🌹
Pestonjee

2 Months Ago

You’re so welcome 🌷
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

1 Day Ago

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‘Thoughts In Time’🌹
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

Essex, United Kingdom



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Writing poems of passing thoughts in time where time unwinds many thoughts and emotions all set for a certain place in time. more..

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