‘Just Like Mary’

‘Just Like Mary’

A Poem by ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹
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More of you Lord and less of me🌹

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Just Like Mary’

Just like

Mary Magdalene

Turning
From
Sin
Was
Not
Done
In vain

But

Worthy
Of Gods
Name

He spoke
Gently
Speaking
Truths
Of
Conviction
For us
To choose
New
Direction
Leading
To
Perfection
Beyond

The
Resurrection

No judgement
Just
Love

Unconditional
Through
Suffering
Sent from
Above

Showing
The way

Turning
From
Wrong

Leading us
To
Where
We
Belong

Away
From
The world

Torn
Between
Flesh
And
Spirit

Guiding
Us
Through
It

There’s
No
Excuse

We never
Knew
It

The pain
The suffering

He still
Cried
‘Father
Let your
Will
Be done’

The faithful
Son

Set to
Save
Man

Just
Reach out
Your
Hand

Reconnect
It’s
Part
Of
His plan

He’ll
Lead you
To
The
Promised
Land

The love
You sought
Through
Fleshly
Thoughts

Only

Heartache
And pain
Has
Bought

But
Forgiveness
Has
Been bought
On
Calvery

For both
You
And
Me

Without
A
Thought
He
Suffered
For
Victory.

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
21/11/20

© 2020 ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹


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The thing I love the most about the way you depict a relationship with God -- how it feels like a relationship with another person. I don't go for elevating God as an entity above us. I think His love is more effective in lifting up the downtrodden, if they can feel it as palpable & everyday real-life, just like the love of a person. In fact, when people feel lacking in love from other people, this is the whole reason I love feeling the God source of all the palpable everyday love we might be craving. Nice way to conjure up my favorite reasons to rejoice in God's love (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

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The thing I love the most about the way you depict a relationship with God -- how it feels like a relationship with another person. I don't go for elevating God as an entity above us. I think His love is more effective in lifting up the downtrodden, if they can feel it as palpable & everyday real-life, just like the love of a person. In fact, when people feel lacking in love from other people, this is the whole reason I love feeling the God source of all the palpable everyday love we might be craving. Nice way to conjure up my favorite reasons to rejoice in God's love (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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‘Thoughts In Time’🌹
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

Essex, United Kingdom



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Writing poems of passing thoughts in time where time unwinds many thoughts and emotions all set for a certain place in time. more..

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