Beauty is on the Inside

Beauty is on the Inside

A Poem by astoundinglyattractive

They say Beauty's on the inside,
but I beg to disagree.
My Liver ain't my pride,
and my Stomach ain't too pretty.
You can blame it on the Wine,
the Tequila or the Whisky-
but my Kidneys ain't the kind
to make lookin' at 'em easy.
And if it comes down to it,
my Lungs are black as Coal;
my Spleen's about to quit
and my Heart is tickin' slow.
Instead you shoulda told 'em exactly what you meant-
this little act is getting old.
Say, "Girl, you look like a piece of s**t-
but you've got a pretty Soul."

© 2013 astoundinglyattractive

Author's Note

I take things too literally

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u've got great imagination! i loved it! 100/100 =^.^= ^.^

Posted 8 Years Ago

What an amazing subject! Great!

Posted 8 Years Ago

AWESOME! I like it very much.

Posted 8 Years Ago

I really enjoyed this. The reality of it made me laugh. I love how you portray beauty in a realistic sense.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on April 15, 2013
Last Updated on April 15, 2013



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