Anchor

I feel like I’m slipping

    farther

         and farther

              and farther

                   into oblivion

Like an anchor as it slips

    farther

         and farther

              and farther

                   into the darkness

I keep falling

    farther

         and farther

              and farther

                   into my own mind

                        and I’ll never be seen again

The same way an anchor falls

    farther

         and farther

              and farther

                   into the water

                        where it will never be seen again

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I liked the whole theme... even the way you made the design of an anchor... may be in the whole scheme of thing sin making the presentation...you left a bit out of the poetry itself... just may be:

I feel like I’m slipping
farther
and father
and father
into oblivion

Like an anchor as it slips
father
and father
and father
into the darkness

I keep falling
farther
and father
and father
into my own mind
and I’ll never be seen again

The same way an anchor falls
farther
and father
and father
into the water
where it will never be seen again
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I feel like I’m slipping
farther
and farther
and farther
into oblivion


Like an anchor as it slips
farther
and farther
and farther
into the darkness


I keep falling
farther
and farther
and farther
into my own mind
and I’ll never be seen again


The same way an anchor falls
farther
and farther
and farther
into the water
where it will never be seen again