The Watcher

When will the winter rain in your mind fall to its eternal rest?
As I am speaking up and coming out from my old shell,
Lack of trust is faking your voice, strangling my words away.
Open your eyes and look at mine
With memories of weeping your hours away,
Above the conscious heart and yearning soul.
Having the source of pure embracement,
True hearts will flare out due to their beatings
And bleed out lakes while never surrendering their hopes.
Don't be hindered to try and release yourself
As I'll always be your watcher, bathing in warm seas,
Eluding mass drownings and whispering
In your non inquisitive ears that my promises are real.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

'True hearts will flare out due to their beatings"
Love that line...
I have been in this situation too many times...
both of us not trusting enough to trust...past pain can be such a hindrance to opening our hearts.
Such a good write...all those views and no reviews?
Shameful....

j.

[R.A. Youngblood]

Thank you for your kind words!

[Kim S.]

Above the conscious heart and yearning soul.
Having the source of pure embracement,
True hearts will flare out due to their beatings
And bleed out lakes while never surrendering their hopes.

Love this part a lot, this is wonderful, you are very talented
keep writing always

[light and ashes]

So amazing and touching.....

100

[Poetic Beauty]

Self doubt and not being able to trust make life hard. We all need that one person we trust without hesitation. That whisper that says to be yourself and it’s going to be okay.

[R.A. Youngblood]

and that person is precious.

[Poetic Beauty]

Probably the most important person one can have