Your Ghost

Your Ghost

A Poem by Fallen_Immortal
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I'm starting to see a reoccuring theme... my worst fear.

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I know it's too late,
But is it a crime to wish that you could change the past?
I can't think.
It's been so long.  Why did this have to come to pass?
Crying;
Past the buried tomb lays your heart.
Has it bled?
Or is it only mine that has fallen apart?
 
I cannot live without you.
Lying next to me; your ghost.
I cannot breathe between these
Sobbing tears; choking.
You're here beside me.
 
Lying awake,
I cannot sleep.  I cannot keep this up.
Nightmares haunting;
I cannot tell if I've woken up.
Please tell me it's a dream,
That you'll be waiting for me.
Say I'm not alone.
Please come back home.
 
I cannot live without you.
Lying next to me; alone.
I cannot breathe between these
Sobbing tears; choking.
You're killing me,
Here beside me.
 
The moon is isolating my darkest hopes.
Resting on the tomb; stretched across your stone;
Falling on me like blood red snow,
I fade away to join you in death, so cold.
 
I cannot live.
I cannot breathe.
Here beside me in the joyless light,
It isn't worth it.  There's no point in life.
 
I cannot live without you.
Lying next to me; your ghost.
I cannot breathe between these
Sobbing tears; choking; alone.
I cannot scream out loud.
My voice is gone; a hollow cry.
I cannot let this take me.
I'm still alive.

© 2008 Fallen_Immortal


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We each have our own ghosts and personal demons to face almost daily... What happens in the past already happened and there's nothing we can do about it at all, but to learn from it and move on... The only way is to move on is to forgive, not just that ghost or yourself, but both of you...

You sure have written some true defintions of the hauntings within our hearts and souls from the past that couldn't be forgotten... Very well descriptions...

Overall, it's all still great tho...


Posted 15 Years Ago


this is an awesome piece.. loved the title and the articulation thru the poem.. very well expressed! :)

Regards,
Poetic Soul

Posted 15 Years Ago


the beat is wonderful and I love the emphasis with the repetition you use. The theme is awfully bittersweet and i could see the blood red snow too well. Good work


Posted 15 Years Ago



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I'm a young girl, seeking to better understand my own writing before I can accomplish all that I wish. My dreams are vast and many, yet I have found that I am not ready to obtain them. I have much mor.. more..

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