Broken...

Broken...

A Poem by SOUL LESS

I hang upon a tree

A veiled cocoon

Dreaming my dreams

Scared by my nightmares

I try to speak, and the world stifles me

I try to breath and the world suffocates me

I try to protest and the world breaks me

And I lie upon the ground

A shattered chrysalis


SOUL LESS.

© 2011 SOUL LESS


Author's Note

SOUL LESS
I am not usually this morbid a poet,but I had a fever for two days and thus this poem:P Suggest a better title than broken.

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Easy to become soul less. Seem we are walking upon the wrong path. We must hold on tight to what make us human. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry. Made me think today.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

My favorite line was "I try to protest and the world breaks me"

Simply explains how I feel every single day of my life. Very good poem, and you are an amazing poet and I have only read a couple of pieces of your work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Actually, if you think about it, the logic of reason clearly states that this title is perfect for it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


made me once think of a fallen cacoon a couple years back, i'd never gotten so close to one before. It saddened me that this butterfly had no chance of ever breaking through to find it's new self, knowing it knew what it was instinctive to be but now forever unable to reach it. Your poem evokes in me that feeling of vain attempt to breach the surface of that cacoon; best part it doesn't need long lines or rhyme. It's simple in its lines.

Posted 8 Years Ago


O.o woah!!!!!!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


This poem is freaking amazing I love this

Posted 8 Years Ago


Love it! It may be short but the message in it is amazing XD You wouldn't guess it was from a fever XD Love it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Touching. breathtaking, amazing! I can relate. Loved this poem! xD

Posted 8 Years Ago


Really nice short write, i like this part:
"Dreaming my dreams
Scared by my nightmares"
... nicely written, indeed touching.
I hope you feel better. : )

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Nakushita, Kansuki



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