My Mother

My Mother

A Poem by SOUL LESS
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An ode to my mom...

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A ray of hope,
A shining light,
A gift of God,
A reassuring sight.

A blessing of heaven,
A comforting face,
A rose pure,
In the world’s race.

A blessing Divine,
A sparkling star,
Whose hug takes you,
Into a world afar.

Face aglow,
Smiling sweet,
Helping you,
Stand on your feet.

Comforting us,
When we cry,
Working day and night,
But never a sigh.

To me she is,
Very dear,
With her by my side,
Never fear.

© 2011 SOUL LESS


Author's Note

SOUL LESS
I wrote this for my mother about 4 years back. I haven't edited it again so any suggestions are welcome. :) And send me a title picture for the poem.

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SOUL LESS -

As a mother of two boys (one being disabled) ... I am deeply touched, as your words speak of unconditional love and affection toward her.

My childs hug, it will live on eternity for it is so precious to me.

You enlighten me with what mine hugs and love feels like to them.

Have a wonderful day! Thank you...

Posted 9 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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this is so cute. i love the sentiment and the sincerity!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a beautiful tribute to a mother. I feel like phoning mine now...:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


SOUL LESS

4 Years Ago

Thanks! You should. I work abroad, so I call her every couple of days at least :D Thanks for the rev.. read more
SleeplessVolcano

4 Years Ago

Know how you feel.....I'm also a few thousand miles away - those phone calls are worth gold. :)
Your poem needs no editing. It is lovely.

Julie

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Being a mother This poem hits home
It also reminds me of my own mother
And the mother I hope to be or am
As a mother this would make me so happy it is gorgeous
I would not change anything

Posted 7 Years Ago


SOUL LESS

7 Years Ago

Thanks for reading :)
Chloe..Across the Universe

7 Years Ago

Thank you so very much I appreciate that sweet complement and this gorgeous poem has your mother rea.. read more
SOUL LESS

7 Years Ago

Yup. She thinks it's alright. But then we are an incredibly prosiac family :)
Just drop the commas, bro. It's annoying as hell. Since you put the commas at the end of each line, I don't think it's necessary. We're already aware that we need to pause for a second.

Your style kind of remind me of this guy from this website. I forgot his name though. Also, thank you for pointing out in your profile that you are, in fact, a boy.

Sappy, but cute. Overall a good write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


SOUL LESS

7 Years Ago

Well, a lot of people can't figure out from the name, so drop the sarcasm :) And well, I was taught .. read more
A beautiful expression of your love for your mother. Wonderful work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I think this is perfect just the way it is!!! It's a very heartfelt and beautiful piece:) I hope one day my children will look at me like this:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Quite sensational! loved it

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is so sweet. I know your mother loved this. I love it just the way it is without any edits. It's beautiful, wonderful write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


You know, you're really gifted with poems. You should check out the three of posted yesterday! :) They're a little dark...but they came from the bottom of my heart. (hehehe that rhymed!)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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