blueskyblueskybluesky

i lift my wings and lock my fingers into yours
and hold my breath for the first time in years.
the blue sky
blue sky
blue sky
is falling around us as we
ascend into the clouds.
the sun is approaching and our eyes
are getting heavy,
but nothing can pull us down from here.
so we tighten our grip
and watch our feet disappear
as we pull each other into heaven.

Reviews

[Annelise]

Tis is short and simple, no filler words, not a dull moment. I like the bare bone effect to your writing, in the other ones I've commented on you'e used this style. It's respectable and difficult to attain. I loed the title and the poem itself is beautiful and tender. You're a very atmospheric writer.

[Ally Baker]

I have to agree with the review before mine. This IS beautiful and wonderfully written. As I read it, I could imagine it in my head, the images so clear. You did a great job with this piece. Great write and thank you for sharing!

~~Ally Baker
"Dont upset the writer. They might put you in one of their books and kill you."

[Rachel DeHart]

This is beautiful.
Wonderfully written, and with an amazing flow.