The Unknown Place

What if?

Lets go to the world,

Where there's no wealthy nor poverty.

Lets go to the world,

Where's no border to divide,

the place where comfort in stride.

Lets go to the world,

Where's nothing as racism,

people have faith in humanism.

Lets go to the world,

where peace wanders in the air,

the place where competition doesn't take place.

Lets go to the world,

where creatures aren't slaughtered,

the place where nature aren't shattered.

lets go to the world,

where crime is the only thing getting murdered.

Reviews

[Lorry]

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Really like this piece Farhan, although I'm sure that place already exists.....In children's eyes that have not yet been taught our ridiculous hate of anything different from ourselves. Maybe if we stop teaching them our own mistakes, we can leave the world a better place for the next generation.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you, and you are absolutely right nemo..thays what I was thinking ..Agreed with your words..this must put into action..

[Coyote Poetry]

My hope and wish too my friend.
"Lets go to the world,
where creatures aren't slaughtered,
the place where nature aren't shattered.
lets go to the world,
where crime is the only thing getting murdered."
Thank you Najam for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Cœur]

Be careful with your choice of words, I did catch a few mistakes. Other than that, this was a very nice poem. Good job.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much..actually I'm still struggling for improvement of my mistakes..hope one day I'll make it perfect

[prachi prangya agasti]

A good topic to dwell on. Positive thoughts about a world that we should create

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you for your precious time

[ern]

I wish this place existed. Nice piece though :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you😊

[HeyJadeXO]

if only the world did change into this.Very inspirational !

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you for your visit😊

[Valentine]

Very well said and all so true. Love the last line. Valentine

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much miss. valentine

[Njeri Brooks]

Very nice!!

I like your idea of paradise. However, paradise/peace is not achieved without war and suffering... (i.e. abolishment of slavery in the U.S.= American Civil War;
i.e. ending the genocide of Jews in the Holocaust= World War II.)

Unfortunately, if you truly desire those things, then you also must be willing to do what it takes to achieve them (aka- going to war if talking/negotiation doesn't work).

[Farhan Shaikh]

Right absolutely right..but I think sometimes our thoughts can also makes difference..btw thank you soo much for ur review..😊

[Njeri Brooks]

👌 no prob

[Ren Grace]

I wish there was a place as nice as this. This poem shows how greatly you want to purify this dirty world. Its a difficult task to walk outside and not be horrified at what we see. If only we didn't have change our perspective, rather than change the world itself to something more beautiful than this.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Right you are Ren, and thank you for your visit..i wish we all will make Changes in our planet..

[Johnny Dep]

Yeah sure I will join you, haha, Good write farhan.i loved it, truly I wanna sew this world circles with humanity.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much bro...ur visit means alot😉

[Johnny Dep]

Hehe, You are welcome brother.