He Stayed

He Stayed

A Poem by Farhan Shaikh


© 2018 Farhan Shaikh


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Your poem is heartfelt. There is strength and courage in your words.
Richie b.

Posted 10 Months Ago


This is a divine love.a connection of a lifetime.the truest form of commitment

Posted 1 Year Ago


He was a kind man I can say, to stay along her. Writing this as a image conveys great emotion. I really liked this.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Gorgeous. If that can be said about a poem. Barley girl is right. It's what we all wish for.

Posted 1 Year Ago


This is what we all wish for, if we don't already have it. Someone who will stay thru the tough times, as well as the good times. You show that in your poem, which interestingly goes from slightly distraught in the first stanza to being a little borderline freaky in the second stanza. This bizarre twist in your message feels strange & slightly threatening (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


Beautifully written "He Stayed"...loved the writing style and the meaning behind the words.
:))

Posted 1 Year Ago


Farhan Shaikh

1 Year Ago

Thanks Priyanshi
I like the use of consonance; it really stresses how meaningful it was that "he stayed".

Posted 1 Year Ago


Farhan Shaikh

1 Year Ago

Thanks so much for reading 😄
There's a contradiction I'd suggest proofreading.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Farhan Shaikh

1 Year Ago

Thanks for that😄
This would make a great emo song lol but really, i love it!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Farhan Shaikh

1 Year Ago

Thank you for reading 😄
so he did the right thing,he stayed

Posted 1 Year Ago


Farhan Shaikh

1 Year Ago

Yes indeed.


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Added on June 4, 2018
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Farhan Shaikh
Farhan Shaikh

Mumbai, India



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