Now you see me

Now you see me

A Poem by Farhan Shaikh

Same old sky
But the stars are new,
Like a brightest one
I'm looking at you.
I wonder if you see me too 
You may go far
Saying no goodbye,
I'll keep looking for you.
Untill we are beneath
the same sky, i wish
you'll see me too.
With your half smile you 
Walk away from me, 
half your smile is due.
You may tilt your eyes
But this time i caught them,
And Now you see me too.
                                            

© 2018 Farhan Shaikh


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Oh how i wonder as well where that certain person is do they see us do they want to find us- are we all just lost stars? Wonderful- i hope they see you and find you - i hope we all find the place our hearts call home🌹

Posted 9 Months Ago


This poem brought a smile to me...I enjoyed reading it.
:))

Posted 10 Months Ago


Farhan Shaikh

10 Months Ago

Thank you priyanshi
Such a wonderful write here, I really enjoyed this

Posted 10 Months Ago


Farhan Shaikh

10 Months Ago

Thank you 😄
Well done! I think that you did a great job comparing people to stars. I loved it!

Posted 10 Months Ago


Farhan Shaikh

10 Months Ago

Thank you 😄
I like the way you use "stars" as a metaphor for the way this world is full of people & how we meet someone in a completely different part of the world, almost as if it's not even under the same stars, & so many of the friendships that are formed these days follow this kind of wandering spirit of being just two stars in a huge sky full of stars. I love the way your poem subtly addresses how we often never meet in person, even tho we become very close friends thru the ether. Beautiful scene to show all these ordinary friendship issues in modern life (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 10 Months Ago


Farhan Shaikh

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much
I love reading about stars, this is very descriptive and heart touching. Very nice words.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Farhan Shaikh

10 Months Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed
Sweet sentiments when you miss someone who is not close by. Heartfelt and sincere.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Farhan Shaikh

10 Months Ago

Yeah.. thanks for the time
sweet sentiment my friend,this has been the way we see each other when we`re apart

Posted 10 Months Ago


Farhan Shaikh

10 Months Ago

Thank you Mr. Wordman
 wordman

10 Months Ago

you`re welcome
Farhan,
Clever poem, I like the way the last three lines tie everything together.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Farhan Shaikh

10 Months Ago

Thank you Mr. Richie

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Farhan Shaikh
Farhan Shaikh

Mumbai, India



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