Tell me girl

Tell me girl,
Tell me where you are.
Swimming Deep inside the ocean?
Or gliding between those stars?

Tell me girl,
How you've been?.
Since we first met,
When we were both nineteen.

Just tell me girl,
I've waited so long.
You've been in my poems
You've been in my songs.

Tell me girl,
Can you see that spark?
We entwining our hands
And dancing in the dark.

Just tell me girl,
I'm the only one you see.
In all your pretty dreams,
In all your fantasies.

Reviews

[Haniya]

Dude, good job! I think you should start writing songs. Honestly, I would listen to them all day long.

[Najam Us Saher]

This is really sweet and heart touching. Very well written.

[wordman]

reads like a top ten song