Her Reflection in the Mirror

~ Friendship and Tragedy*

Looking in the mirror

Seeing our reflections

I can still hear her

"This is deception"...

 

"It's you, and it's me."

"No...it's all percetion."

"Why can't you see

The mirror tells no lies

The liar is he 

who dares to deny

That the bauty of beauty

Of a beauty isn't face

I say this with surety

Your emotions are of lace."

 

You wore your heart 

Upon your lace sleeve

In your clenched fingers

Dark moods did you weave

 

You were broken.

Soon, the mirror was, too.

This, your last token

Tragic Angel's black hue

And, had I spoken,

I would have told you.

I would have woken

Your heart to the truth.

 

The purity of beauty

Of purity isn't face

I know this with clarity

As I gaze at your lace.

 

A dark lace hankerchief

As a cover for the mirror

Dark moods did she weave

I can still hear her...

Reviews

[InsanityWriter]

Very nice. :) I loved the imagery.

[Faria C]

Aww, thank you, dahling (:

[Acer]

I can't believe on my eyes indeed that i'm reading such a beautiful words here on the site. I think you've a lot of talent, you are a talent of talent yourself i'd day by your this beautiful writing indeed, loved it....

"It's you, and it's me."

"No...it's all percetion."

"Why can't you see

The mirror tells no lies

The liar is he

who dares to deny

That the bauty of beauty

Of a beauty isn't face

I say this with surety

Your emotions are of lace.".....

these lines are awesome...

The purity of beauty

Of purity isn't face

I know this with clarity

As I gaze at your lace.....

these are also good, i think you should have to publish your own book, not long pages book, just you can publish your own little book's with your own name. If you'd ever do it wht i said, then plz...tell me i'd like to read your books' too, you really has won my heart truly saying.

I can't elaborate my feelings about your this poem through my words, but want to give you bless & want to give you little flower...

[Faria C]

Thank you for the compliment, it's much appreciated. I was bored and thought if the idea to write this out of the blue (:

[Acer]

My pleasure :-''). I think you boredomeness has been made an impact suddenly.

[Faria C]

Aha thanks (=

[Acer]

My pleasure once again. Loved to read your work too i'd say :*)

[Faria C]

Haha you're too kind

[Acer]

Good to see you again. Thank's, i think you're too :*)

[Faria C]

(: