Feelings That Chime

There are many words, many feelings that can relate to one another, many people can relate their selves to the words a poet writes.

Feelings That Chime

Have you ever felt the pain,

like you have lost more than you gain,

like the heart you own is broken

because of the many words left unspoken

Have you ever felt alone,

in the crowd of all known

Like heart hurts to say a word,

broken heart made your vision blurred

Have you ever been so high,

like you are completely free to fly

Then all your dreams, they're shattered

because of all the things which once you flattered

Well, precious let not poor thoughts lead you down,

if you are happy, if your aren't, be like a clown

Cover your pain with a smile and laughter

let your foe think, your life is happily ever after

Beloved friend, it's nothing, but a matter of time

Giving up on yourself is a big crime

Many wounds are healed by time

With your feelings, these words would chime

Author's Note

Thanks A lot for stopping by, hope you'll enjoy! :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree with your logic.
"Beloved friend, it's nothing, but a matter of time
Giving up on yourself is a big crime
Many wounds are healed by time
With your feelings, these words would chime"
Old wisdom. Failure, just lessons for us to not repeat the same mistakes. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Destiny Dreamer]

Yeah! And Thank You very very much for your kind review! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[sereenaoutloud]

this is really good, it has a strong rhythm and nice message. All things take work and effort and there will be set backs and heartache along the way but that is what makes us not only who we are but also stronger. Never give up keep pushing forward eventually it will all fall into place!!
Great write Dreamer

[Robert]

I think we or must of us have been there at some point or another. Great expression and emotion shown here. Sometimes words spoken in a negative way never heal. Thanks for sharing.

[Willard Wells]

Very true words you have spoken her in a very beautiful way. We are a generation of immediate gratification. This is not what works for the long term. Everything must have time to resolve itself. And smile and make them wonder. Thanks for sharing.

[Rajat malik]

Oh!!! once again dear your poem motivated me but I think sometimes it is hard to hide pain

[Destiny Dreamer]

Yeah RIGHT! Thank You so much! I am very GLAD that You liked it :D

[Rajat malik]

always welcome :)

[Perkele.7885]

(Beloved friend, it's nothing, but a matter of time
Giving up on yourself is a big crime
Many wounds are healed by time
With your feelings, these words would chime)......This is the stanza of your poem that makes the most immediate impact to me of what you are saying.
Try to be more pointed in your use of your English!

[Destiny Dreamer]

OH! Yeah sure I'll try to.

[Chirag Kumar]

There come moments in life when you are down and quitting seems the best option. But we fail to think that only little bits of motivation are enough to make us achieve our goals. A very inspiring poem Dreamer. Lovely :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

Yup CORRECT Dear friend! Thank You so much for stopping by and reviewing my Poem! :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yeah, one of the simplest, yet most amazing and true messages. And its also true, that many can relate to the words of a poet. I'm a rating 100# and this one is going to my favorites.

[Destiny Dreamer]

Yup! You got it right! Thank You so much!!! :) You are always ENCOURAGING ME!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You are welcome. And you really are a great poet.

[Destiny Dreamer]

Aww this compliment means more than a world for me... Thank A lot once again! :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

to* :D Opps

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Always welcome.