Illusion Of Sight

"Everything is not what it seems"

Illusion Of Sight

Face may be smiling,

though, who knows what's it hiding

Severe pain, heart so broken,

when it smiles with lips wide open

Heart might be denying,

but to yearn for thy love, it might be dying

Feelings so deep inside it locks,

'bout their love when ye mock

Eyes may have cried a lot,

when they look so pretty, who knows what they've fought

Burning feelings inside when they are lit,

tears of happiness, they call it

Friends, when they help you,

who knows, they are hurt too

Hide their pain to rescue thee,

True friendship thou shall see

Illusion of sights,

blind to see what's right

Look deep in the soul,

then thee shall know, there is a hole

Author's Note

Critiques are WELCOME! Thanks for checking, Hope U'll enjoy!

Reviews

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Illusion of sights,
blind to see what's right
Look deep in the soul,
then thee shall know, there is a hole...

I see your thoughts as deep like an ocean but every time i read them I fall with a questing...
How can you write so stunning? You stunned me!

[Destiny Dreamer]

Aww.. U are very very very ENCOURAGING! Thank You so much.. Thanks A LOT! I always wanted my thoughts to be deep. I think I have accomplished my Dream! Thanks dear Friend! :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

You are a great a poet and a good friend. Thanks and keep writing...Welcome!

[Destiny Dreamer]

Thanks.. ^_^ I will keep writing till my last breath! :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Good, like to read you always! Keep smiling :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

:) :) :) :D

[Hunar Miglani]

Such a meaningful poem...so beautiful. Keep up the good work

[Muhammad]

Our faces, hearts, eyes, friends...all exulting different layers of understanding.

A simple read encapsulating complicated undertones.

Keep dreaming.

[closed]

very reflective

this dotes on alot of emotions

kindling the fire for a great poem

-Dream

[Mayank]

very vivid, good write...

[Irenic]

Your poem is vivid. It is simply dropping into the bottom of my heart.

[Riv]

Very interesting, I cannot give critique because I'm not entirely awesome at poetry(I write it but I mostly do stories). This is something you can relate to, which is something I always enjoy in a poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

We show true self to the few.
"Friends, when they help you,
who knows, they are hurt too
Hide their pain to rescue thee,
True friendship thou shall see"
Today. I believe no-one know who I'm or need. A new world. Illusions are many and true self become forgotten. The poem is very good. Made me want to write too. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Dani The Unreviewed]

No critiques for this piece. Its just darn beautiful the way it is. Ya know the ratin 100# an... umm...this is goin to my favorites.

[AaronFreitas]

Did you write this about me? haha just kidding :) I liked it... you are right.. sometimes a smile hides a lot of feelings, hurt and pain. Awesome write I loved it :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

Haha Of course what do U think U can write about me and I can't :D lOl .. Thank You very very much for checking this out :) So NICE of YOU! :)

[AaronFreitas]

Haha I knew it :)

[Pratik Mishra]

Your thoughts are very good, and I enjoyed the poem!

[Destiny Dreamer]

Thanks A lot :) :) :)