A Poem by E.J.Byrnes

Just a small free-lance poem that happened to come to me after watching Alice in Wonderland, and deep thinking. :)


As I build ivory castles in the air, you're constantly swimming around my awareness.

Delightful hysteria, please, visit me more often!

If Rabbits could sing, and Emeralds bring

You back to me, Dear One, I would be ever so grateful.

For now, I bask, in that perfumed dementia for evermore

With You, My Love.

© 2013 E.J.Byrnes

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A wonderfully whimsical write, full of longing. Beautifully done.

Posted 8 Years Ago

I really liked the fantasy like quality of your poem. Great Job!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Those short verses gave me a feeling of fantasy and mysticism. Great job!

Posted 8 Years Ago

I wouldn't call it mystical exactly, but it's certainly a coherent fantasy world full of love.

Posted 8 Years Ago

This is mystic and the imagery is very beautiful.....nice!

Posted 9 Years Ago

I am captured by both the beauty of your words and of the feelings you have conveyed in this lovely poem. Truly amazing.

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

In so few words you managed to harness my focus and drive it a place of mystical dwellings where I marvel in your brilliant beauty.

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a fortunate discovery I've made by accident; your beauty. BZ

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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8 Reviews
Added on June 7, 2011
Last Updated on November 17, 2013
Tags: castle, dementia, dear, hysteria, poetry



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