Awayness.

Awayness.

A Poem by Fay Slimm

 

 

Awayness.


Time-racked love sickens yet clings to need's favour.

Truck rumbled awayness by distancing rails.

Hope blurs in acceptance thru smoke-blinded eyes.

Will healing wing free from his hurtful goodbyes ?

 

Long-held faith reflects back to hurt's parting words.

Heart wavered at train wheels speeding him further.

Come nightfall I ask why, with no-one around

Waiting's old echo still whistles lone track sounds.

 

 

 

    

© 2019 Fay Slimm


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A lovely poem Fay... There is nowt I dont like muchly about 'Awayness'.... Neville

Posted 3 Months Ago


Fay Slimm

3 Months Ago

Pleasured to hear you say that my friend.... double stanza sonnets have always read sadly to my mind.. read more

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Fay Slimm
Fay Slimm

Camborne, Cornwall, United Kingdom



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