Chance.

  

 

Chance.

 

Pasts were forgotten,
no more were they strangers
to each other, yet
unknown then to themselves 
change produced awe      
    in the shape of desires begot      
by need beyond norm 
        and years to renewal related.          
Senses felt numb
until wisely realized was fate
meant to open love's
    gate so two might make one.       
Beyond time's fixed
awareness begins destiny's
chance for romance
to assist duo-maturity grasp
fresh passion again.

 

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"maturity, fresh passion....Beyond time's fixed awareness....years to renewal related"
you wrote my parents into this one...70 years they were married...
and seemed as much in love when my mom passed as they had been in their courting days.
so nicely done.
j.

[Fay Slimm]

What wonderfully happy memories you have of parental devotion to each other dear jacob - So pleased the read brought back their experience - wow 70 years and still in love - what an example and thanks for sharing it.

[Robert Trakofler]

chance is a poem in a word and you just defined it here perfectly dear Fay:) Lovely lovely lines thanks for reaffirming my love of the word chance

[Fay Slimm]

Many thank yous Robert for unearthing my secret love-affair with the word Chance - Weaving its magic for others to ponder made a writing delight for my imaginative mind - as do other of my firm favourites in the word-world. More to follow I hope but meanwhile your review is much appreciated.