Unsung.

Unsung.

A Poem by Fay Slimm

 

 

Unsung.

 

Each season bequeaths measured remembrance as landscape
slides from sleep to resurgence.

Winter's kiss does not leave the white throat of rooted fingers
death-locked beneath frozen earth.

 

Spring never neglects to coat earth with flowered embraces of
paler courtship's poppy touches.

Summer's fierce arms heat to a crisp with frenetic passion for
blitzing neglect of grave-marked hush.

Autumn's relief calms as colourful carpets spread with leaf-fall 
bidding the brave to rest again.    

           Former lost unions bestow no relief until love discloses diverse             
seasons of unsung vibrations.  

© 2020 Fay Slimm


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It would seem your poem implies that each season is not guilty of having an unsung vibration & I love how you express the intentions of each season in fierce determination. But to look over the whole of seasons going by, I can see how the vibrations would have an unsung quality . . . it's the way we focus on the season right before us, forgetting about whatever ones have recently flown by (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

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Fay Slimm

2 Weeks Ago

You discerned the message and thanks a load Margie for your considered review on Unsung. Huggles...... read more


.. a most poignant and fitting requiem .. sadly, such a pleasure to read ..

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Fay Slimm

2 Weeks Ago

Sincerely appreciated your read and review dear friend.
This is very relevant to Remembrance Sunday as you paint the seasons and their personalities in all their glory and colours.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Fay Slimm

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you John for your visit and review of an effort to compose a seasonal remembrance of those who.. read more

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Fay Slimm
Fay Slimm

Camborne, Cornwall, United Kingdom



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