Life

Recently I have been struggling

Letting the darkness take my happy away

Stained dark clouds of sorrow seeping in

Is this how it's suppose to end?

The dirty orange sunset takes away my mood

Every passing day that takes away my youth

All I have is truth and we all have to end

And all I can do is hold on till then

The raging chaotic that's how we all started

Reverting back to our roots, never should of departed

Reviews

[Bryad Polis Valentino]

This is tragically beautiful. It could be something about a spiritual battle against unseen dark forces, such as depression or some other negative effect.

The way day or night, darkness or light is the emphasis of this poem's strength. Good job and thank you for sharing. May you have good fortune on your writing path.