Steam

Steam

A Poem by Fearless Sunshine

I like the way steam flies up from my tea.
It twists and twirls like it's in a ballet,
Graceful yet hot to the touch.
Other times it looks like warriors,
Fighting their heroic battles on horseback.
It's almost as if I'm seeing into another world.
To capture such a thing is foolish, I know.
Most people would claim that it's 'just steam',
Nothing more than wisps of hot air.
But it's much more fun to think otherwise, no?

© 2014 Fearless Sunshine


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I like the abstract imagery and comparison to where you imagination is taking you. My only critique is that I personally would take out the "no" at the end. If it's for rhyme, I don't feel like it works. I feel like it would have a much stronger and defining ending without it, but that's just MY opinion. Good penning :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on October 8, 2014
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Fearless Sunshine
Fearless Sunshine

Boston, MA



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She/her or they/them pronouns. I love to read and I'm giving writing a go. ~ I like reading, writing, film, and dancing. My ukulele is my third arm and I love to play music. My favor.. more..

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