Too much Part 2

Too much Part 2

A Poem by Li
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A sequel to Lilithium Hydra's "Too much"

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No, I won’t act less

I won’t be less of me

You’re leaving because I am too much?

Yes I am too much

Too crazy

Too outspoken

Too smart

Too loving

Too understanding

Too caring

Too wanting

Too outgoing

And too friendly

And the world never did understand me

But I thought you would, I thought you were a part of me

I spent many nights asking myself if I was too defiant

Too dreadful

Too detached

Too daunting

Too daring

If maybe I was too much.

But I know love is not like this

I know love is understanding

I know it’s not ignorant

So if you want to leave, leave

I won’t be less of me, to make you more of a man.

© 2019 Li


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kind of sad really, but so well written and expressed though.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Li

5 Months Ago

Thanks Kesch!
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Li
Check out Aspiring Aspirin's "Too much Part 3" at the link below
https://www.writerscafe.org/writing/AspiringAspirin/2139450/

Posted 5 Months Ago


Strange how the expectations of others makes us feel so inadequate. If someone wants to change you in their image they don't love you. They are clay modelers who wish to have an icon of their reflection. A nice flowing free verse with questions and contemplation and defiance. Nice writing and some alliteration thrown in!

Posted 5 Months Ago


Li

5 Months Ago

Thanks John. Glad you enjoyed it. I think you'll also how the character goes from questioning their .. read more
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DAH
Love this poetry rant, and the message that it conveys
is truth, truth-absolute.

Excellent job, Li. Keep pushing, keep writing, stay focused.

Cheers,
DAH

Posted 5 Months Ago


Li

5 Months Ago

Thanks a lot DAH!
DAH

5 Months Ago

My Pleasure!
Girll!!! Damn!! I love it. Gele aynet. Thank u for flipping it around. xx

Posted 5 Months Ago


Li

5 Months Ago

I am glad you liked it Lili...I wanted to do it justice...lol!
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Check out Lilithium Hydra's 'Too much' in the link below!
https://www.writerscafe.org/writing/LilithiumHydra88/2137200/

Posted 6 Months Ago



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