I trust you

I trust you

A Poem by Li
"

God will always find a way.

"

I looked ahead and saw nothing

I marched forward to get something

I kept going, I kept going

But still, I found nothing

 

I asked if that was it for me

Had I lost the meaning to my life, to my being

Dead ends all around,

where could  I go? Who could I be?

I sat where I stood, asking again if that was it for me

 

In the mirror I saw a dead person

One locked up in her own prison

Her face resembles that of a ghost

Her dreams are crushed

She’s dead, dead from the soul

 

But I saw the light in my dreams, I saw you

You showed me the way, you gave me a clue

Why had I been so blue?

Knowing you are always here, always true

I guess for a second I doubted you

 

I can’t say everyday is perfect

But from now I’ll let you be my life’s architect

I will trust you God through and through

I am alive now because of you.

 

© 2019 Li


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I myself am not much of a religious man - I find my hope in the people around me, and the promise of making tomorrow a better day than yesterday. However, despite me not having the same Faith as you, I can feel the surging passion and love towards your beliefs, and it's a very serene feeling to find that you've found your forever Hope. Beautifully written, and I hope your life will be wonderfully crafted by the one you put you trust in - you deserve every ounce of happiness you receive, Li. :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


Li

2 Months Ago

Always so good to hear your insightful comments Chrysantheranium, thanks a lot :)
I've been waiting for god to pull me out of the darkness for many years. I have my doubts.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Li

2 Months Ago

And He will but you've got to trust Him and let go.Thanks for your comment Relic!!
' Knowing you are always here, always true - I guess for a second I doubted you.. '

Times when so many of us feel utterly alone. Searching for something, somewhere can make the spirit really fade.. but perhaps trust and hope helps.. if you see a spark, somewhere. What intense but sincere words here, Li.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Li

2 Months Ago

Thanks so much emmajoy, like you said one spark is all it takes to drive us from the darkness and Go.. read more
"In the mirror I saw a dead person." Oh how I relate to that. I absolutely love this. The writing and concepts are beautiful. I just love it.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Li

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much Scarlet!
this is amazing, I really enjoyed this

Posted 2 Months Ago


Li

2 Months Ago

I am glad, thanks a lot Kesch!
Hopelessness is not hopelessness until we give up having hope.
In time of pain and depression, in time of worries and confusion, when all seems to be over and nothing seems real, I think there's still a way a point where we neglected to look at.

Love your uplifting poem, telling us we can look at it very well, we'll see the light wait for us at the end of the dark tunnel.

And knowing the reason for being alive could make the spirit more stronger to travel the miles.
And I'm glad you know you're not alone but with God who is the architect of our lives. That is a strong faith.

Wonderfully written, Li.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Li

2 Months Ago

Yes Kay, there is always a way out but sometimes we become to blind or too overwhelmed to see. It's .. read more
Kay Salisu Titilola

2 Months Ago

Yes, it's what I've experienced.
And this is my testimony.
And my pleasure to read you.. read more
Li

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much Kay!
“Ill let you be my life’s architect”. I wish i had that certainty. I’ve experienced this struggle so many times i lost count. I ask the same questions everyone else does. “Where are you?” I love how simply you put it.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Li

2 Months Ago

There are too many variables we can't control in our life, too many uncertainties and it can be quit.. read more

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