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Detoxification

Detoxification

A Poem by Fieora Andros
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Describes the feelings of a confused soul trying to apprehend the actions of the past and scared for the unforeseen ones.

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Wherever I go,
A seed I sow,
What is the fear?
Is it the thought of end coming near?

I looked around,
But I am tangled and wound,
These thoughts make a hollow me,
Ever pondered, is us the same we?

I tried to understand,
How to unite the receding sand,
To apprehend what was going on,
I had to reach where it was born.

I was scared of looking back,
Where to search in the stack?
I closed my eyes,
The thought was scarier to see how time flies.

I felt the pain,
I didn't know whether it was a boon or a bane,
My inner me was buried in grave,
It recurrently said, "I am afraid."

Could I ever overpower them and declare my win?
Was getting into this so bad of a sin?
I deeply sighed continuing to give it a thought.
These non-ending thoughts won't ever end with a dot.

© 2020 Fieora Andros


Author's Note

Fieora Andros
Feel every word while reading. It carries a lot of emotions.

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First of all, welcome to this wonderful world of WC!

Great write and seems right away that you carry a lot of potential and markings of a great writer. The poem as a whole tells a deep, layered story which can be felt by the delivery of every words. The imagery is apparent as is use of metaphors - both are done very cleverly.

Rhymes are really great and makes a great read.

Looking forward for reading more and more great peices from you in future!

Best,
~KA~

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fieora Andros

3 Years Ago

Thankyou so much! I look forward to more of your reviews. :')
I will definately post more.



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Wow. This is clever. It does carry a lot of emotions.
"Ever pondered, is us the same we?" This gave me chills.
Please keep on writing and sharing your work.


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fieora Andros

3 Years Ago

I am so glad that you liked it. Thankyou so much!
Love your reviews. :')
Ayesha

3 Years Ago

Welcome 🙂
Unfortunately, I know this place too well.....
I have spent a lot of time living in it.
You expressed these feelings well.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fieora Andros

3 Years Ago

Thankyou so much. I look forward to more of your reviews. :')
light and ashes

3 Years Ago

Sure :) you're welcome
First of all, welcome to this wonderful world of WC!

Great write and seems right away that you carry a lot of potential and markings of a great writer. The poem as a whole tells a deep, layered story which can be felt by the delivery of every words. The imagery is apparent as is use of metaphors - both are done very cleverly.

Rhymes are really great and makes a great read.

Looking forward for reading more and more great peices from you in future!

Best,
~KA~

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fieora Andros

3 Years Ago

Thankyou so much! I look forward to more of your reviews. :')
I will definately post more.

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Added on April 28, 2020
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Tags: Connections, hurt, expectations, scare

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Fieora Andros
Fieora Andros

Ranchi, Jharkhand, India



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Hello everyone! I am Shreesha Ganguly. I am an absolute amateur writer who pours her heart out through poems. A lot of things I am yet to learn and so kindly give reviews. more..

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