Unpredictable

Unpredictable

A Poem by FireFly15

Life is such an unpredictable thing.

 

 

One day you're full of joy,

the next you want to die.

One moment you're in love,

then all you can do is cry.

 

One day you're watching the sunset,

The next you're blind.

One day you're with your friends,

The next you're left behind.

 

Live life like theres no tomorrow,

Love life like you know no sorrow.

Think for yourself,

Dont put your dreams upon a shelf.

 

 

Live life to the fullest and never regret being yourself.

© 2010 FireFly15


Author's Note

FireFly15
Once again, I was bored.

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Some very beautiful comparisons in this poem. A very honest and true piece. I really love the last stanza:

"Live life like theres no tomorrow,
Love life like you know no sorrow.
Think for yourself,
Dont put your dreams upon a shelf."

- great message.


Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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You have some of the most up lifting poems I have ever read.
"One day you're with your friends,
The next you're left behind."
Every one is left behind by some at one time or another.


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful poem............ im speachless.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good poem, though i found it to flow better when you remove 'like' after the words 'love' and 'life' in the 3rd and 4th line from the bottom. Other than that, nice :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Old wise saying. Take no chances. Have a damn boring life. I like this poem. We need to challenge life everyday. Your ending speak the truth. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You are more creative bored than I am when I am at full throttle. I am jealous. This is another great piece. Very inspirational.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Some very beautiful comparisons in this poem. A very honest and true piece. I really love the last stanza:

"Live life like theres no tomorrow,
Love life like you know no sorrow.
Think for yourself,
Dont put your dreams upon a shelf."

- great message.


Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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FireFly15

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Originally my poems were meant to be inspirational. Althought, as of late they have become more of a venting outlet. I think I need to sort out some problems of my own before I can help others with th.. more..

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