Topaz Eyes

Topaz Eyes

A Poem by FireFly15
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One of me darker poems. It deals with an issue that I find to be all too common. I hope by reading this some girls will stop and think.

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Topaz Eyes

 

 

Your heart breaks,

Your dreams, at stake.

Your love is gone.

Will this pain go on?

 

I see him love her.

Its just like we were.

She laughs, he smiles.

They'll be like this for only a while.

 

He'll take all she has,

His eyes, a seductive topaz.

And she will oblige.

Then he'll cast her aside.

 

He'd do the same to me.

If behind those eyes, I could not see.

Her heart will break.

I hope she learns from this mistake.

 

 

 

 

 

© 2010 FireFly15


Author's Note

FireFly15
Dont trust a boy who asks you for sex. You WILL regret it if you oblige.

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Awesome Poem, I'm glad I read this, I wrote a poem called "How I Found Her" and this seems like the female version of it... lol... Good Work Though.. I enjoyed reading this..

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I totally agree with you, if someone really loves you they will wait.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Good poem, there is a lot of depth to that poem, you use the rhyme very well and it could easily be turned into a song. Keep it up.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your words are wise. When we give in for no purpose. It is just a game and sometime we can be hurt by poor decisions. A young person with wisdom know love is slow and easy. No rush for the things that are precious in a life. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 4 people found this review constructive.

There are too many guys out there praying on ladies to fill there animal craving and more unfortunate too many ladies that fall for it... a wonderful flow and rhyming scheme.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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FireFly15
FireFly15

The Pitts, IL



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Originally my poems were meant to be inspirational. Althought, as of late they have become more of a venting outlet. I think I need to sort out some problems of my own before I can help others with th.. more..

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