Broken Home

Broken Home

A Poem by FireFly15

 

No matter I do, or what I say

These thoughts in my head wont go away.

I try to write to get it out.

No matter what I do I'm full of doubt.

 

I walk by myself but never alone,

This house is just a broken home.

I know in my heart that in this life,

Theres more that just unending strife.

 

I want to see life in a whole new way.

I know tomorrow is another day.

Another day to try and fail.

No more nights, so scared and frail.

 

I no longer need that perfect romance.

All I need is a second chance.

A chance to make this life my own.

A chance to mend this broken home.

 

 

© 2010 FireFly15


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Beautiful poem. simple yet meaningful. Good job on the rhyme.

I want to see life in a whole new way.
I know tomorrow is another day.
Another day to try and fail.
No more nights, so scared and frail.
My favorite :)

Never give up.You will have a chance so once you have it make sure you don't waist it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Wow! This is... Stunning! I love the rhyming scheme, it flows wonderfully. Stanza #1 and 2 really sticks out to me, maybe because I seem to be feeling a little bit like this. This poem seems to reflect the inspiration of never giving up and never loosing hope. I can't say WOW enough!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Beautiful poem. simple yet meaningful. Good job on the rhyme.

I want to see life in a whole new way.
I know tomorrow is another day.
Another day to try and fail.
No more nights, so scared and frail.
My favorite :)

Never give up.You will have a chance so once you have it make sure you don't waist it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This has great meaning that mostly all of us can relate to from time to time. Life can be very difficult but we shouldn't give up.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was a very heartfelt poem. Sometimes what we have and what we need does not always line up. I hope you can find what you need. I like the last line as well. You wrote this really well.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Life gets tough on us...seems as if everything shatters before us and we're left with tiny pieces. Everything seems impossible to put back together....but you should never leave hope...give yourself a chance to do right...make piece within yourself.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a heart breaking poem. I makes the reader want to tear through the clouds and let the sunshine pour in.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hard to find good in confusion. When things are going wrong. Hard to change the direction. Sometime stopping and re-setting a life can help. I like the feel and desire to succeed. A second chance is what most of us need to find the right place to be. A powerful poem with a lot of sadness and some hope at the end. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I walk by myself but never alone

that line really accentuates the pain and loneliness of this poem... overall a very powerful piece of writing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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FireFly15
FireFly15

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