Endeavor

Endeavor

A Poem by Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
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This was inspired by the recent birth of granddaughter and by a piece of prose written by Emily.... http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/55935/2104612/

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Endeavor

 

Extravagant the sensation

Of a tiny hand taking mine

Delectable the elation

This simple act, so grand… sublime

Progenitor in definition

Is god, to children, for all time

Humanities aspirations

Embodiment culmination

Sleeping swaying weeping playing

Crèche conception’s nursery rhyme

© 2019 Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)


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An optimal portraiture of divine perception you drew with your words, Bunny. A warm and wondrous sensation swells in your readers heart as they read....Extravagant the sensation of tiny hand taking mine... Michelângelo's The creation of Adam comes to mind. An angelic salutation for a subliminal experience.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

brilliant blessings bounty :) by beneficent balladist :)



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Congratulations dear Bunny, grandchildren steal our hearts so quickly and we have more time to enjoy every minute of them than we did our actual children.
She will have you wrapped around her little finger in no time at all .... ♥

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

pretty much the moment i held her it was over
Hey, Bunny, Gratz on the new granddaughter! :)
I like when babies yawn. They do it just like we do.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

Thanks Mattavelli, they are cute when they yawn but when they laugh its even more contagious
A very nicely rhymed recognition of what is indeed a sublime moment. To feel the touch of a newborn hand is to experience a passing of the torch, evidence of the survival of the species. It is a miracle. Well done.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

thank you good sir
It's the beauty of new life; a beginning. The elation is so contagious! I love this grand poem!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

thank you my dear queen
The first four lines siply capture the absolute magic of that moment! And indeed children do, for a time (all too short) see their parents as 'gods' providing.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

Thanks for the read John:)
Bad bunny your poem is good. :p

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

thanks Rahul:)
Those titchy little hands and tiny little fingers are so adorable Bunny. I can tell in your lines how elavated you are in spirit by this new arrival. She will bring you much joy. You certainly are elated at this news and so you should be. Blessings to all of you.

Chris

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christine Anne Shaw

5 Months Ago

I can imagine just how difficult that must be for you all. Keeping my fingers crossed and I will say.. read more
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

good news Chris they released her this evening
Christine Anne Shaw

5 Months Ago

That is brilliant news Bunny :)
thou art truly blessed BB.. as indeed are we who stop by this page.. I shall be sure to raise my glass to ya this very eve in 'The Muddled Man' a local hostelry and to wet the baby's head squire....

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

an act of pure joy for this bunny's heart good sir
Neville

5 Months Ago

and true my friend and very true.. because ya both worth it... N
An optimal portraiture of divine perception you drew with your words, Bunny. A warm and wondrous sensation swells in your readers heart as they read....Extravagant the sensation of tiny hand taking mine... Michelângelo's The creation of Adam comes to mind. An angelic salutation for a subliminal experience.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

brilliant blessings bounty :) by beneficent balladist :)
A wonderful event
We have finally got ours cutting the grass and turning off the occasional light
Made for grandparents to spoil

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

6 Months Ago

it is an enjoyable thing.... that spoiling

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Added on April 19, 2019
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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

pittsburgh, PA



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Hello My Name is Robert Trakofler My nickname is Bad Bunny... I am the Bunny but the bunny isn't me long live the bunny I own an art gallery and performance space in Pittsburgh called The Zeni.. more..

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