Delectation

Delectation

A Poem by Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
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This is my portrait Of my friend David Goldstein A local artist and writer

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DELECTATION 

 

Elemental state snapshot

In cultivated capture

Disfigure to dashing a delicacy

 

Monumental impression

To cogitated fracture

Dismantles the doctrine so elegantly

 

The trust pierced

Hands of the composer’s

Brush bleeds sincere

Shades of crimson roses

 

Quills thrust fierce

To truth’s trickle transpose

Bled blush revere

Swaying opus proses



© 2019 Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)


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Your creativity is off the charts with this one. Since you often reside outside the dots, I sometimes don't catch every little secret in your messages. But this one is crystal clear, largely becuz I started with your excellent & vivid image. This is so thought-provoking, as to the price of putting our thoughts & feelings in words. Is it worth the pain? Or sometimes are we even craving the pain? I love your off-the-beaten-path thought waves (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

Margie you are spot on but the special twist in this one is.... Drum roll please.... David, the pers.. read more
barleygirl

5 Months Ago

That is too strange! Never in a hundred years would I have guessed this to be based on a true story!.. read more
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

i do enjoy your journeys:)



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Sanguineos lines brushed dipped and quilled
Type casting beats, beneath our skins
Lift the pen and save the heart's capacity
Draw breath and blood in harmony
Till blackened be the hands in death..


Interesting !!!.... Good Write !!

Jazzy ♥

Posted 5 Months Ago


A poet, though, must write. To hell with the nasty critics. Putting emotions on paper is what keeps us going...gets us through the darkest and the lightest of times. Your style is unique. This is a good one. Lydi**

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

thank you so much for the read Lydia:) I am still in the process of forming my voice/style or perhap.. read more
Lydia

5 Months Ago

No need for it to be a form...just get your emotions and words on paper....
' The trust pierced - Hands of the composer’s - Brush bleeds sincere - Shades of crimson roses.. '

You seem to have to have melded the Arts as a whole above.. all creative skils, maybe, to arm yourself against the strain of finding what you want in what you have in hand, perhaps. Whatever the content's meaning, I can only wonder at how your mind works, how you invite readers to decide what and how... and then, stay to read again and admire. Perhaps!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

Emma!!!!! You inspire me:) with such words of encouragement for that is what you do to me when i rea.. read more
emmajoy

5 Months Ago

Thank you.. ..
We bleed as artists daily...sometimes we feel crucified by it...its both awakening and death and I believe you have elegantly complimented this art with your mind bleed. Excellent work Bunny!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

thank you my queen He is a fascinating person he started out as a writer for the national enquirer :.. read more
The artist lives and breathes and bleeds his art and from his fierce passion rise opus, epic prose. Since art is the purest and most sincere of human expressions, this is the ultimate tribute to an artist. Your choice of words used to sketch the artist is stunning, as is the artwork. My compliments on this poem bunny!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

Truthfully the closer someone is to my heart the harder it is to find the words to write them this h.. read more
DIVYA

5 Months Ago

It might have been difficult but the end result speaks for itself. Your friend will be proud of this.. read more

this is without any doubt an artists poem, regardless of artistic genre or preference, tis bloody good and in any book it would stand out, screaming to be heard and seen and felt.... Another good un Bad Bun..... Neville

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

I enjoy the melding of the arts and finding the common threads that we have in interpretations
Neville

5 Months Ago

tis like a sensory tapestry innit.....
Bunny,
a real life postmodern poem! and your artist friend . . . the same. Particularly liked the 3rd stanza.
Thanks for the read.
Tom

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

I enjoyed your story glad i found it:) yes i think that third stanza is a favorite for me too. thank.. read more
the stabbing through the mind and heart, two for one...and then both try to find the keys to share that pain...
red blood of the poet, in a black void of time and space....the composer, the painter, the poet...
all share with what's flowing their vein, the intense pain...
and as artists, we coagulate...
we understand.
j.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

that is, what this is, in here... a brotherhood of nutz and a lovely sliver & sample of the collecti.. read more
Your creativity is off the charts with this one. Since you often reside outside the dots, I sometimes don't catch every little secret in your messages. But this one is crystal clear, largely becuz I started with your excellent & vivid image. This is so thought-provoking, as to the price of putting our thoughts & feelings in words. Is it worth the pain? Or sometimes are we even craving the pain? I love your off-the-beaten-path thought waves (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

Margie you are spot on but the special twist in this one is.... Drum roll please.... David, the pers.. read more
barleygirl

5 Months Ago

That is too strange! Never in a hundred years would I have guessed this to be based on a true story!.. read more
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

i do enjoy your journeys:)
A spectacular, raw image and poem of what writers might see as a severed self, their own writing piercing flesh, dripping blood-ink onto a public canvas, pinned to a black wall for all to critique. Impressive work.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

Thanks good sir, The more i wrote about him the more i realized i was describing myself too.

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Added on May 7, 2019
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Tags: composition, deconstruction, revelation, opus, painting, writing, composing, process, beauty, ugly, conveyance

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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

pittsburgh, PA



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Hello My Name is Robert Trakofler My nickname is Bad Bunny... I am the Bunny but the bunny isn't me long live the bunny I own an art gallery and performance space in Pittsburgh called The Zeni.. more..

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