A Chance Brush

A Chance Brush

A Poem by Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

A Chance Brush

 

She said

Please don’t pick the flowers

Every bud tries as hard to bloom

As you

 

He said

These stack gifts her hours

Reverie cast these eyes to plume

 Imbue

 

I said

She’s sown seeds to tower

Treasures passed breathes cries pursue

Renew

© 2019 Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)


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Your first stanza echoes in my mind becuz I relate to it so much. One of my pet peeves are people who feel that natural beauty (vegetation, wildlife, or landscape) must be plucked or changed to suit mankind. Then your last stanza is a reminder that beauty can be freely cultivated as a steady presence for renewal, for all, instead of being plucked (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

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barleygirl

1 Month Ago

All my life, becuz I knew I wanted to be a writer, I justified every tangent in life as a necessary .. read more
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Month Ago

I am so sorry to hear of her death I know your feelings of her are conflicted by circumstance non th.. read more
barleygirl

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Thank you for your amazing words of kindness (((HUGS))) . . . I've been quite amazed at how lighthea.. read more



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were flowers meant to be picked? That is the question! Bees and birds rely so much on the flower's pollen. We forget this by the beauty of the flower and how it brings colour inside not realising the consequences! Nice write Bad Bunny!

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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Month Ago

After experiencing this "brush" with my neighbor I doubt i will ever pick another flower again:)
Leave well enough alone...i have some lilies that bloom every year...not sure where or why they ever arrived, but i don't argue and don't mess with them...and they show up every year.
the tower part reminds me of Rapunzel ....he could climb to see her until she cut her hair...
the flowers tower unless cut...

j.

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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Month Ago

holy crap Jacob your absolutely right Rapunzel fits it perfectly
Your first stanza echoes in my mind becuz I relate to it so much. One of my pet peeves are people who feel that natural beauty (vegetation, wildlife, or landscape) must be plucked or changed to suit mankind. Then your last stanza is a reminder that beauty can be freely cultivated as a steady presence for renewal, for all, instead of being plucked (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Month Ago

All my life, becuz I knew I wanted to be a writer, I justified every tangent in life as a necessary .. read more
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Month Ago

I am so sorry to hear of her death I know your feelings of her are conflicted by circumstance non th.. read more
barleygirl

1 Month Ago

Thank you for your amazing words of kindness (((HUGS))) . . . I've been quite amazed at how lighthea.. read more
It could be of course, because I'm listening to Miles Davies as I read this; but this has a jazz rythm to me. Pastorale Jazz is that new?
Suffice to say I love it. One of my favourites of yours.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Month Ago

Wow... you heard that? twas a strange cadence call I admit didn't even realize it till you just ment.. read more

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Added on May 31, 2019
Last Updated on June 3, 2019
Tags: blooms, flowers, truth, sharing, furtherance, legacy, simplicity, love, children

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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

pittsburgh, PA



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Hello My Name is Robert Trakofler My nickname is Bad Bunny or sometimes Flaccid Bunny... I am the Bunny but the bunny isn't me long live the bunny I own an art gallery and performance space in.. more..

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