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A Poem by Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
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__Acquaiescence __

 

Awash I wade in wavering sways

Swashing my face the savoring spray

Drift draft drag

Delineate

Drink

To dry land

 

Align my eyes to tapering skies

Azure glides slide to deepening blues

Flex form flux

Fascination

Flow

Yearn call views

 

Advance comply to hankering trance

Transverse span expanse wandering course

Swift stroke stir

Supination

Swim

Search ache’s source

 

 

 

Aghast bright bolts fly showering blasts

Rain drops blur bearings battering strained

Clap crash crush

Condemnation

Coarse



Cracks courage reined

Adrift briny swells reckoning rift

Reach sea to sky rim beckoning each

Swig splash sips

Salination

Sleep

Death swallow leach

 

Aloft sea sky draft billowing waft

View the yearn call my ravishing muse

touch tears trill

Titillations

Tryst

Expanse suffuse





© 2019 Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)


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The alliteration is great in this one....as is the references to being on the sea. I love to cruise and the muse does come with me on my journeys.....I don't have the heart to leave her at home! The view from a cruise ship is ever so inspirational. Nice one, Bunny. Lydi**

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Months Ago

thanks Lydia. water calls to me often... I am adopted so i didn't know my birth family until i was o.. read more
Lydia

2 Months Ago

Very interesting...it's in your DNA!


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Alot of things roll through my mind with this one. Chasing those things that have hardened the heart while enveloping our being in a blanket of security. Floating into places where remain unable to keep our shoes dry. Crazy stiff BB, I like it!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Months Ago

Thanks Crowley not sure if I like this one yet still on the fence
I really like the flipping back and forth between rhyme and alliteration, it creates and effect similar to the swishy swashy feeling of being in a boat and tossed around by waves.

Posted 2 Months Ago


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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Months Ago

that is precisely what i was aiming for:) bless your heart I listened to ocean sounds and storms for.. read more
Edie Blue Starfish

2 Months Ago

yay!! :) well it totally worked! you may call this experiment a success!
swimming in drink....and for some the muse spills over...
I really enjoyed this Bb...but my only suggestion would be for you to try to use some alliteration!!!!
:))))

Posted 2 Months Ago


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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Months Ago

I promise to work on it

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Added on June 17, 2019
Last Updated on June 25, 2019
Tags: sea, sky, muse, yearn, join, rain, storm, swim, lines, delineation, water, oceans, storms, torrents, death, rebirth, drowning

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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

pittsburgh, PA



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Hello My Name is Robert Trakofler My nickname is Bad Bunny... I am the Bunny but the bunny isn't me long live the bunny I own an art gallery and performance space in Pittsburgh called The Zeni.. more..

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