Soar Feet

Soar Feet

A Poem by Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

__Soar feet__

 

Meandering the stream

In introspection

Gathering glance flash beams

Of my reflections

Capturing color gleams

Blush to complexion

Shattering scorning scenes

Crushing rejection

Scattering compares sheen

Brush of perfection




© 2019 Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)


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Dear Bunny. You just reminded me of my Grandad. (well not you young man, but your lines). My dear old Grandad suffered from sore feet and he would sit with his feet in a bowl of warm water to get some relief. Do you know I haven't thought about that for years until I read you :) You have your own unique style Bunny. Always good to read you. Enjoy the rest of the day.

Chris

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

I was just sitting down with my feet up:)
Christine Anne Shaw

3 Weeks Ago

You were meandering the streams of whatever, you took me to water :)) Hope your little footsie are .. read more



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This is my favorite so far...
*Suggestion*
Say "In"
Not "Of"
The "out-loudness" of your flow-scape will thank you...
Man I like your stuff...
Also...
Totally a suggestion, perfect either way...
I really do not want to cross anymore wires with anyone, so pinch of salt and all...
Bang-up write

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Week Ago

my wires are pre-crossed so whats another one:) I see your point tho, good idea, i appreciate the su.. read more
Silente-Write

1 Week Ago

No problemo, happy to read...
Your wires are a whole 'nother thing entirely, I hath not the t.. read more
This is by far one of my favorites of yours becuz I'm more of a straightforward person & this message is pretty straightforward, in my view! *smile* I was in love with this poem just after reading the title. That is brilliant! I love your sophisticated rhymes (being a rhyme snob myself) & I love the storyline about bee-bopping thru life's s**t & not letting it get us down! YAY! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Weeks Ago

barley I can be direct sometimes it wasn't on purpose mind you just sort of happened I ahve been dyi.. read more
barleygirl

2 Weeks Ago

Having been forced (by pain) to spend too much time sitting, I am a firm advocate of doing the butt .. read more
' .. stream .. beams .. gleams .. scenes .. sheen = perfection ''

How come I always end up carefully swaying when i read your poems - swear you've the soul of a musician possibly born of liason between abacus and metronome! Thinking things hidden within socks often causes introspective rhyme sans reason.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Weeks Ago

Hey is your computer working better again? I would write about socks i have an affection for socks t.. read more

that is some feat you just pulled off the carpet squire, sofa bound for sure... nice n kneesy too.. :)

Neville

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Weeks Ago

I just turned 50 this month and some kind of switch got turned on it was like God just stopped by an.. read more
Neville Pettitt

2 Weeks Ago

Belated birthday best...ya beautiful bun you....
Lying down with my feet up...perhaps with a pillow under them....is one of my favorite ways to just dream and create poetry. Funny how even pain can be an inspiration! This is great...unique. Lydi**

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks O'Lydia:)
Well I'd say that's quite the talent you have, making something as common day as sore feet sound incredibly poetic.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

Oh Edie I am currently ruled by the foot of which is kinda funny cause my feet exceed a foot in len.. read more
Edie Blue Starfish

3 Weeks Ago

Some people have a talent for walking on their hands.
But I'm thinking you're not the circus .. read more
Dear Bunny. You just reminded me of my Grandad. (well not you young man, but your lines). My dear old Grandad suffered from sore feet and he would sit with his feet in a bowl of warm water to get some relief. Do you know I haven't thought about that for years until I read you :) You have your own unique style Bunny. Always good to read you. Enjoy the rest of the day.

Chris

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

I was just sitting down with my feet up:)
Christine Anne Shaw

3 Weeks Ago

You were meandering the streams of whatever, you took me to water :)) Hope your little footsie are .. read more
You have indeed a unique and one off style BB with your mesmerising word play. I loved the title immediately and the images that go with this are 'soleful' sir!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks john I have been having some feet problems lately I still work like I’m 35 but my body tell.. read more
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

PS you have the sole of a saint:) LoL
John Alexander McFadyen

3 Weeks Ago

Man you work too hard! But your mind works well and has word paints.

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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

pittsburgh, PA



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Hello My Name is Robert Trakofler My nickname is Bad Bunny or sometimes Flaccid Bunny... I am the Bunny but the bunny isn't me long live the bunny I own an art gallery and performance space in.. more..

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