Streams A Thought Flow

Streams A Thought Flow

A Poem by Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
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stream of thought flow thing

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__Streams A Thought Flow __

 

I touch the pool of your thought flow

Streaming along my conscious

Index finger glancing  

Drawing underline

Under yours

Sweet sentient

Sentences’ strokes

Tickling tender transport

Warmth wrapping my body exalt

Hearth to my heart melding my mind flow

Gleaned graces touching traces

Of the places in the paces

Tween those spaces

Of your lines

Witness

Gentle honor

Taste caresses my face

As I place damp finger to my lip

Running its boundry sampling its fine

Scent and sensation filling me A rapture flow



© 2019 Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)


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' 'Tween those spaces - Of your lines - Witness - Gentle honor - Taste caresses my face - As I - '

Sometimes the best stream of blissful consciousness come from extraordinary places and faces. There's amazing warmth here but. eloquence leaves the reader's thoughts on just about the right side of ..

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

was hoping you would read this thought you might appreciate it. I don't usually just right stream. t.. read more
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

Smiling again



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One of your more sensual writes and one that is very coherent and has a beautiful flow. Sorry been inactive despite my return. Have a bad head-cold.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

thanks Eos hope you feel better soon:)
Good deal, Bunny, I could feel the interaction between these two...the gentleness...the exultation...the give and go that is a relationship.

Well done.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

hey hey Ted:) a good drink from a great write is better than just about anything my friend
wow...this is a sweet little write. I love its flow. Smiling

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

Hey Cassie nice to see you:) It seems I can never make up my mind about structure verses flow and th.. read more
What an utterly delightful write Bunny. Tremendous opening line 'I touch the pool of your thought flow'. That sort of bowled me over and the rest was just as engaging. I think you have excelled yourself here. Take a bow Bunny.

Chris

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

Thanks Chris I decided to just let go and let it flow no structure except for the line breaks
i like how you put a physical touch to the mental and emotional connection between the man and the woman...
reminds me of The Warrior by Scandal...when she says..."your eyes touch me physically"---

very cool...Bb.
j.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

Thanks Jacob just trying something new
I have to admit I have never been moved quite so ecstatically as this by any writing. If it's another WC poet, please tell me who. I want to be so moved.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

just a morning visit by a muse I send her your way John:) they never stick around that long anyway.... read more
So easy to get lost in someone or something that completely captures your imagination.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edie Blue Starfish

5 Months Ago

I always find naked is better. There is something very appealing about vulnerability. It's like sa.. read more
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

yeah:) taking hands away from my face now
Edie Blue Starfish

5 Months Ago

: ) good. stand proud.
This reads as a sensitive, seductive, experiental reading of another poets words as they touch the protagonist's heart and as always if full of original word plays.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

boom boom boom... brother John! Sometimes i read and its all boom
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

in other words guilty as..... sentenced.....:)

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Added on June 24, 2019
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Tags: taste, touch, words, heart, soul, absorbing, reading, lines, conscious, witness, reader, rapture

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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

pittsburgh, PA



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I am the Bunny but the bunny isn't me long live the bunny Hello I’m Robert I own an art gallery and performance space in Pittsburgh called The Zenith It is also an antique store and a veget.. more..

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