Dressing

Dressing

A Poem by Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
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4 words and 7 definitions experiment

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__Dressing__

 

Dawning creased smile dread

Clutch crush cling captured

 

Donning mean vile threads

Crush captured clutch clings

 

Haunting dreams rile shreds

Clinging crush captures clutches

 

Flaunting seems guile stead

Capture clutches clings crush

 

Wanting schemes trial dead

Capture clutch cling crushed

 

Pawn pedophiles spread

Captured crushing clings clutch

 

Spawn wings exile treads

Crush clutches capture clings





© 2019 Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)


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I hear haunting music as I read this poem, maybe something harsh from a true horror story. I feel a violence here, an inescapable drum beat of terror and maybe death. I see a perpetrator violating the most innocent, defenseless, then shamed victim, back turned. I see not pretty dressing, but something one might use to wrap a mortal wound.

I might have missed the intent, but that's what I read. A masterfully written poem that captures the essence of man's wickedness.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Month Ago

thank you thank you thank you Yes Its about window dressing and a family that lived with sexual abus.. read more



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This human onion has many layers BB disturbingly so! A unique style

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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Month Ago

Hey Andrew so very true my friend this onion was a pretty acrid one to say the least:)
My crossdressing friends like to refer to each other as girls. Not girls in that exhaustively, Venusian sense. But as a teleportation process where objectivity can be commanded, or willed for. You are who you are as you appear in the space you occupy......no one else. If you use the C sound shamelessly everything that begins with C becomes a masterpiece. But wait, there's more. Dressing, in this world of selfies, pustule's full of ego and self gratification just waiting to be burst, the poet still is digging trenches. because trenches is where the crush of "wanting schemes" flow interminably, thru the town.

Beautifully written my friend.....dana

Posted 1 Month Ago


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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Month Ago

wow what an interesting interpretation... holy smokes that's so it. My stepdaughters husbands family.. read more
I hear haunting music as I read this poem, maybe something harsh from a true horror story. I feel a violence here, an inescapable drum beat of terror and maybe death. I see a perpetrator violating the most innocent, defenseless, then shamed victim, back turned. I see not pretty dressing, but something one might use to wrap a mortal wound.

I might have missed the intent, but that's what I read. A masterfully written poem that captures the essence of man's wickedness.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Month Ago

thank you thank you thank you Yes Its about window dressing and a family that lived with sexual abus.. read more
This worth a commendation. The alliteration, the construction and the metaphors are all writing in good condition. What a beautiful combination of a thoughtful word!
This is a great job.

Thumbs up!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Month Ago

Hey hey Kay, some horrible stuffs been going on with my stepdaughters husbands family. having a hard.. read more
Kay Salisu Titilola

1 Month Ago

Yeah you are right, Robert.
Most people masquerade themselves in disguised, painting their ap.. read more
You make the act of dressing sexy and like an art form. In addressing your dressing, I sense the blessing but something is vexing in the pressing. Can there be a vial in the trial? I'm just messing around but really enjoying...

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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Month Ago

hey Sami:) I keep editing this one guess i should of waited but i think its finished now

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Added on June 26, 2019
Last Updated on June 28, 2019
Tags: family, pedophilia, hiding, covering, shame, control, scars, rape, fear, rage, smile, brutality, molestation

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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

pittsburgh, PA



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Hello My Name is Robert Trakofler My nickname is Bad Bunny... I am the Bunny but the bunny isn't me long live the bunny I own an art gallery and performance space in Pittsburgh called The Zeni.. more..

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