Driving Expression

Driving Expression

A Poem by Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

__Driving_Expression__

 

Steamroll sojourn symphony spin

Rumbling ramble tumbling trundle

Tire twirl ticks

 tap

Inclination

 

Shifting staccato sleet strike sounds

Stumbling scramble grumbling struggle

Cant climb coax

Crux

Destination

 

 Storm surge slips serenity sounds

Tunnel trek tranquility thrust

Sways steering

Sharp

Intonation

 

Coasting coarse compel cruise capture

Reaching rides relish road rapture




© 2019 Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)


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Seeing as you have had some fun in my comment boxes... I am returning the favor, as it is nearly impossible to not do with this buffet of words in front of me... Almost as if you are driving my expressionism with force of symphony conjecture steamrolled synthesis captured im inclined to see a destination of intonation intros and tones needed for tonal recipes i call it cruising they call it boozing i call it whos-he they call it you on weed its coarse though this course of torn corpses whole bodies shoveled i call it dumplings they call it a stumbling directive i call it oranges i pluck voraciously

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Week Ago

You pretty skinny maybe I should be on the orange diet too:) but the munchies oh those munchies
Silente-Write

1 Week Ago

I love it... But not orange so much, just rhyming it... Because when you ask people to give you a wo.. read more



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Get in the car and drive, mutha f***a, screeching tyres, adrenalin highway hurtling head long into the night, wired and alive, the speed of the language has thrown me back in my seat, whiplash, I might have to sue, lol

Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

6 Days Ago

Sorry Gram I let my insurance lapse:)

you sir are the buns knees when it comes to these.. I really wanna do that road trip and maybe call in on ya one day.. Top marque to ya too....

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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Week Ago

That would be something rather special Nev make sure you bring your guitar it would be fun to write .. read more
Neville Pettitt

1 Week Ago

I might have to borrow one, but hell yes, it would be something to write home about :)
dear Robert... your poetry reminds me of Modern Art.
Although I may not completely understand, each line reminds me
of circumstances in my life, so as I uniquely interpret your lines,
it becomes my poem in my mind. truly, Pat

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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Week Ago

That dear Patricia is all i could ever hope for in writing.
You know what this put me in mind of? Well at the moment that would be my motorcycle. However my first thought was of the very first time I drove a stick shift. What an exhilarating experience that is to a young boy. Use to be driving was fun. it was a blending of man and machine. Much different from today. the sound of the engine the clicking of the valves. Feeling the motor when it shifted gears. Those things are lost on the new vehicles. They literally drive themselves. Im sure you remember the difference between then and now. as well as the temperamental carburetors.

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Tate Morgan

1 Week Ago

I had a 69 gto ragtop. I 68 monte carlo and a 53 chevy that all had sticks The final was in 1986 whe.. read more
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Week Ago

The Torino 1971 red 2 door fastback rag-top was my fave 350 cleveland 5.8 with an after market Edelb.. read more
Tate Morgan

1 Week Ago

hahah thats great. you know its bad enough we cant relate to the new stuff. I mean a 5.4 liter ford .. read more
These are some of your best crafted lines that I've read, when it comes to in-depth alliteration along with an imaginative train of ideas. I was noticing that this could apply to driving, as in using a vehicle, but it also applies equally well to driving a bicycle down the road or driving a golf ball down the range. As always, you are a master at tinkering with grouping word sounds, not to mention dynamic verbs that convey the sensations of driving/being driven (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Week Ago

why you always make me mirthy when you like something i write Margie:? bounce, bounce... OUCH:)
barleygirl

1 Week Ago

Speaking of "bounce, bounce" . . . I was sitting here at my computer, where I can see out front & a .. read more
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Week Ago

awe hope the Lola and Paloma are nice to the bunny :)
The range of feelings and emotion on a road trip are one of a kind. This captures those feelings in a dash to the finish line and then some. Get in man, lets hit the road!!!

Posted 1 Week Ago


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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Week Ago

Hey Crowley I get feeling if you and i hit a road-trip the fracas left in our wake would be legendar.. read more
People call your work prime alliteration, I call it divine rhyme in bunny hop time" It would be wonderful to hear you read one of your creations.. have you thought about vocarooo or similar? Meantime, time traveller you swerved in and out of places few humans would go with the above spell. Fascinating.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Week Ago

whats vocarooo... never mind i google it I try anything:) thanks emmy
Deft time weft, and warp, in your poem B.B....we feel you driving straight into an altered state of mind.
I used to call the 7 hour drive from the Bronx to our cabin in the Adirondacks, “The I-87 to Heaven”. Somewhere along the way we zoned out of the ordinary realm of reality. Your poem is a masterpiece of creating that exact feeling- in superb literary form. How do you write like this?! Rat-a-tat reads the inviting percussion of your wickedly alliterative and perfectly cadenced lines... you wow us with sharp kaleidoscopic imagery of storms, tunnels, sleet, hills, curves- a total roller-coaster ride. Love it to the N-th degree of extrapolation my friend! Wishing you a safe cruise home, wherever you may roam...

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Week Ago

truthfully you hit it right on the head Annette:) I write in a meditative state sometimes I focus on.. read more
Quite a drive that Bunny. Your trademark alliteration superb and I swear I heard every sound as I journeyed through this with you. Great use of language and expression here.

Chris

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Week Ago

I was listening to so many driving recordings while writing this trying to capture the sounds as a w.. read more
My expressiveness does come out when driving or traveling with someone. If you can capture the rapture, then we don't need the ticket for departure. The long open roads and sky are signs and posts for us travelers. What a buffet of expressive words from the sojourner. Kudos sir Robert.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Week Ago

Thanks Sami I did enjoy this ride i started it weeks ago and couldn't finish it and then I read some.. read more
Sami Khalil

1 Week Ago

Wow! You are welcome.

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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

pittsburgh, PA



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Hello My Name is Robert Trakofler My nickname is Bad Bunny or sometimes Flaccid Bunny... I am the Bunny but the bunny isn't me long live the bunny I own an art gallery and performance space in.. more..

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