Sonority Sight Skate

Sonority Sight Skate

A Poem by Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
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just an experiment:)

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__Sonority Sight Skate__

 

Glissading ghost gliding glint grooves

Gathering gifts grace

 

Gleaming gossamer gramophone

Giving glances grandeur

 

Glistening ghostwriters gestures

Genuflecting glory




© 2019 Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)


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Being somewhat hooked on alliteration myself, it's hard for me to call it out when a writer goes overboard with alliteration! *wink! wink!* This is definitely in the "overboard" bunker, but you get a pass becuz you never reach for an ordinary word when you can find a million fresh sparkling examples of whatever you're looking to pick from the word tree! I love words & I wonder how people can write when they don't get downright obsessed (a quality I sense in this poem!) Love how you approach writing for total enjoyment (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Month Ago

sorry Barley I do get a bit overboard at times I just try to do it to say I did it:)



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Being somewhat hooked on alliteration myself, it's hard for me to call it out when a writer goes overboard with alliteration! *wink! wink!* This is definitely in the "overboard" bunker, but you get a pass becuz you never reach for an ordinary word when you can find a million fresh sparkling examples of whatever you're looking to pick from the word tree! I love words & I wonder how people can write when they don't get downright obsessed (a quality I sense in this poem!) Love how you approach writing for total enjoyment (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Month Ago

sorry Barley I do get a bit overboard at times I just try to do it to say I did it:)
Nothing better than genuflecting to the Gs.
I'm now reading this backwards. Was that the real experiment.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Month Ago

ha no i didn't think of that oh god don't plant seeds I will really give myself a brain explosion! h.. read more
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Month Ago

holy crap... it does
Paul Bell

1 Month Ago

Works perfectly. Though, that might be me. lol
This is really a wonderful poems.
I love the skillful alliterations and its thoughtful meanings.

They are best of their kind.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Month Ago

Hi Kay thank you so much I Like to experiment and use you guys as my lab rats:)
sometimes a really smooth poem reminds me of someone ice skating or roller skating making all those glorious moves that take our breath away...the poet pushing his or her limits and doing really risky moves boldly...
j.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Month Ago

I am glad you could see how much energy I put into this one was really pushing the envelope some tim.. read more
Interesting poem. It was a bit hard to understand, but it was probably cause English isn't my first language. It had a good flow to it and fancy sounding words.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Month Ago

Thanks jung Just an experiment with words:)

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Added on July 10, 2019
Last Updated on July 10, 2019
Tags: witness, hearing, sinestesia, muse, ghost, writer, composition

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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

pittsburgh, PA



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Hello My Name is Robert Trakofler My nickname is Bad Bunny... I am the Bunny but the bunny isn't me long live the bunny I own an art gallery and performance space in Pittsburgh called The Zeni.. more..

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