Clouds

Clouds

A Poem by Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

__Clouds__

 

On the good days

My

Ethereal lips breathe

Drifts

Dancing billow mist whispers

Infer intimate midst

Interlace

 

Drawn smoke ring sways

fly

Authorial lifts wreath

Tryst

Glancing silky lace witness

Immerse consecrate kissed

Consummate

 

On the bad days

Cry

Memorial drips sheets

Swift

Splashing lily face listless

Coerce castigate rift

Stealing grace

 

Upon storm glazed

Eyes

Congenial ticks beat

Lifts

Washing forlorn wistful

Reverse lacerates grips

Healing brace




© 2019 Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)


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okay this is how this speaks to me...and i remember days of doing this.
Sitting towards a sunset...blowing smoke rings into the air, watching the clouds forming and passing...creating images of different animals or other things...and being so awed..
"it's life's illusions i recall, i really don't know clouds at all" (joni m.)
reread this a few times to savor the flavor..and imagine the forming clouds.
j.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Month Ago

You are clever one Jacob:)



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Your poem speaks to me of how something we love (like rain) can be both awesome & torturous. The rain symbolizes (for me) how life bombards us sometimes with soft droplets & sometimes with golf-ball-sized hail. As always, your word crafting is vivid with imagery & strong word choices (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks Margie I love a rainy night
Cloud shape-shifters do this on bad and good days to romantics who word the cascade in poetic layers and readers like me see the tryst and want more......... a compelling read Robert.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

caught sense a consonant soul in this Fay:)
Fay Slimm

3 Weeks Ago

My pleasure Robert is always to read and try to interpret the meaning of poets' agenda- - good tha.. read more

when a guy reads something over and over, and lets his cocoa go cold, it dont mean he is is necessarily struggling.. he may just be savouring the moment...taking it all in... I know I am, aint it easy to lose ya self up there.... Fine words any day o the week sir and true..

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

thanks Nev now go warm up your cocoa:)
Neville Pettitt

3 Weeks Ago

consider it downed....
foremost, i like the font you used for this

the style works to help create a mythical feel


seems you're trying to capture a time past

maybe an ideal moment of some sort


i always feel writing can immortalize anything


nice write

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

4 Weeks Ago

Thanks for the read... LitStar I like what you see:) my head was in the clouds as per usual!
LitStar

4 Weeks Ago

youre welcome

im a dreamer myself
And another gossamer riff with edges.
Days of contemplation and the daze of contemplation. Finding the words but more importantly finding the rhythmic gymnastics of clouds.. This you have done.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Month Ago

Thanks ken the way you see things is a wonderful thing to witness even in your reviews could not fee.. read more
As a cloud trippin' fool myself, I relate to this, watching the cinematic nimbus, cummulingus, slowly morphing into evermore poignant signs, Thor approaching, cleansing,

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Month Ago

Thanks Gram... my head has always been in the clouds from the time I was a small boy it got me in a .. read more
gram linski

1 Month Ago

And why the f**k should you, dude, you've earned the right keep on cloud trippin' in the free world,
Sitting watching the cloud formations turn into people, shapes, such fun. I do it all the time, but not while I am smoking. I don't smoke but I did see smoke rings in your imagery. Can be very therapeutic, sky gazing. Almost as good as star gazing, but not quite so good. Can take the edge of a sad mood and elevate the spirits. Alternatively it can make you spill those tears, and that's fine in my book too. Loved your language in this write Bunny. Super read.

Chris

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Month Ago

sometimes i imagine them being transports of emotions and take a certain solace in the idea that oth.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

1 Month Ago

Sometimes I sit there looking at those clouds and laugh. Yes ,I get that. Wondering whether other pe.. read more
That last line so full of hope, after taking in delightful word combinations like ... lily lace listless. What a one, two punch of over shadowed beauty

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Month Ago

Good morning Cherrie:) I was walking home from work and stopped in my tracks when I saw that sky its.. read more
Cherrie Palmer

1 Month Ago

I love when the pen has a mind of its own and whispers sweet nothings to the writer.
Every line added to the strength of the poetry. The hard statement left something for the reader to think about. Powerful and worthwhile poetry shared Robert.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Month Ago

Thanks Coyote I am glad that the meaning was caught and inferred the right amount to be discovered a.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Month Ago

You are doing very well Robert and you are welcome.
Those passing sentiments shift ever so slow like clouds carrying the down pour, drenching you with sensations at a fortuitous hour ... sometimes it is hard to distinguish the tears, and what brings them to a tide.
i am overjoyed to see the rendering of winsome verses, Robert.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Month Ago

you started this poem:) i wrote most of the first verse on one of my reviews it took a while for it .. read more
Mrudula Rani

4 Weeks Ago

Entirely my pleasure, Robert. Tudo de bom para você.

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Added on July 15, 2019
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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

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Hello My Name is Robert Trakofler My nickname is Bad Bunny... I am the Bunny but the bunny isn't me long live the bunny I own an art gallery and performance space in Pittsburgh called The Zeni.. more..

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