Spectacles

Spectacles

A Poem by Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
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Free verse of Bunny and Silent write read at your own peril :)

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Spectacles

 

These spectacles have been ineffective

I am skeptical of my own reflections...

the skeleton shifts when I change perspective

never mind it was just light-inventive

Whew...

Perhaps those dirty-streaks were being deflective

pondering peeks proper gel-preventatives

Pompous-geeks telling me what to invent-and-this

preposterous predisposed pinch-on-my-nose

What...

Nauseous-surgery white-halo double vision-tones

posturing predicaments to a Lasik's extra-pose

An extra-note and possible-predictions-wrote

it's always made in pissy-scrubs, those prescriptions-wrote

...Benedict Pope...

Anti-dote my conjugal joy diction

Switchblade clarity abandon all-hope

Reflection...

Serenity fills me with silver-sidings-ah-rising

sleepiness slink-blinks through the eye of deciding 

Of shimmied-bone

of dying hope

An eye closed...




© 2019 Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)


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Moriarty and Cassidy , on the road again, a joy to my ears, slightly bleeding with shards of shimmied bone and dying hope, one eye closes, another one opens, I worry what your bromance child will look like, lol, good to hear about your humanitarian work in Puerto Rico,double lol, lol,

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Month Ago

it will be a gnarled and pitiful sight indeed but with a beauty only a mother could love in reluctan.. read more
gram linski

1 Month Ago

Haha, you're a cheery c...….



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For three verses, I was following your message & story just fine, but then it felt like you two (often a few wavelengths out into space from where I reside) took this into a nebulous direction! There is great harmony in your styles of writing. I couldn't find anything to discern one from the other. As for your message . . . I used to be heavily into specs, but not anymore! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Weeks Ago

He he Silente-Write is outa sight isn’t he:)

literally a little literary masterpiece.. seemingly seamless, altogether original and loads of other things besides.. you also more than adequately touch on many of my own symptoms, eye can tell ya.... well done both............ :)

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Wow, what a write from the two of you. You have such different writing styles and yet here the combination works so smoothly. I wear glasses too and in this heat they can get steamed up. Couldn't move to contacts, prefer what I've got. I often wear mine on my head, sophisticated ya know. Is this a one off or will there be more from the pair of you Bunny?

Chris

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christine Anne Shaw

4 Weeks Ago

Ha ha :) Not good for the digestion eh?
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

4 Weeks Ago

well hes young and impressionable don't want to upset him to much
Christine Anne Shaw

4 Weeks Ago

:)) ..............
Good one you two. I have been a "four-eyes" for a long, long, time. I wore contacts for 10 years but had to give them up. My friends have mentioned Lasik, but at this point in life I'm afraid I would miss the glasses too much.

Good collaboration guys.

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

4 Weeks Ago

Hi Ted:) I have avoided them for a long time but they got so bad I didn't have a choice:( i'm pretty.. read more
Ted Kniffen

4 Weeks Ago

The specs and the fedora give you a rather 'hip' look
that lends itself to a bad bunny.
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

4 Weeks Ago

I am a hat nut have always been even when i did have hair:) (pretty sure the air force took my hair .. read more
I wear glasses to read and to see the computer...and I like wearing them. They add a certain je ne sais quois to life. You can gesture with them, you can close your eyes behind the darker lenses, you can put them on the tip of your nose. To go through surgery to lose them? Not my thing for sure. Conjugal joy? hmmm...always interesting twists and turns in your writing, Robert. That photo is downright terrifying! The stuff of late night scary movies! Always fun reading your words. Lydi**

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

4 Weeks Ago

its a good thing Silent and I are relatively distant from each other otherwise no telling the mischi.. read more
Lydia

4 Weeks Ago

Boggles the mind! LOL
we see ourselves in a bad light...don't like the reflection in the mirror...and have work done...so much so that we are unrecognizable as a human being...
at least that is what I was thinking about when i read this collaboration....which is really good because it sounds like one poet wrote it...so you guys were quite in sync.
j.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Month Ago

Thanks Jacob not far at all from what I was thinking We alternated every two lines so I can’t spea.. read more
Moriarty and Cassidy , on the road again, a joy to my ears, slightly bleeding with shards of shimmied bone and dying hope, one eye closes, another one opens, I worry what your bromance child will look like, lol, good to hear about your humanitarian work in Puerto Rico,double lol, lol,

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Month Ago

it will be a gnarled and pitiful sight indeed but with a beauty only a mother could love in reluctan.. read more
gram linski

1 Month Ago

Haha, you're a cheery c...….

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Added on July 18, 2019
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Tags: vision, reflection, perspective, thought, inception, self, world, appearance, acceptance, society, influence, prerequisites, dance

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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

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Hello My Name is Robert Trakofler My nickname is Bad Bunny... I am the Bunny but the bunny isn't me long live the bunny I own an art gallery and performance space in Pittsburgh called The Zeni.. more..

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