Synapse Crackle Pop

Synapse Crackle Pop

A Poem by Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

__ Synapse Crackle Pop__

 

Please remind me to smile

 

Reflections get lost in compile

 

Anthology divest

 

Anxiety drag drop depress

 

Deep inside hides a core

 

Sleeps a man worthy of adore

 

Fractured faculty frame

 

Synapse slips snap snipping sustain

 

Intuition purview

 

My visions comprise set askew

 

Of your visage my eyes

 

Are true no ego fortify

 

Barricade revise view

 

Exists in my stride misconstrue

 

Please remind me to smile

© 2019 Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)


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I too was taken to my snap, crackle and pop breakfast cereal, relished as a child when I first read your title Bunny. It is easy to get wrapped up in reflections and sorrow when you read poetry, stuff buried deep which rises to the surface when least expected. You have to keep smiling though. Whenever Bunny is about I smile. Says alot about you, this piece.

Chris

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Month Ago

i'm glad you see me Chris means the world to be understood these days



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A tender supplication from some one, who lets slip from his memory the wonder of his smile.
Por favor sorrir. This is not a reminder but a request because your smile brightens up the world around you.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

thank you Mrudula
The key to memories is never linger to long, just long enough to take in its aroma and never so long that you feel your loss.
I'll take my bowl with Viva the skim milk of the 70's

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

he he i like how you think Cherrie:)
Having breakfast is a start to a new day so wear a smile and tackle the day head on, snap crackle pop! Clever writing your signature style.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

hey Andrew nice to see you:) Thanks man!

smile and that's an order from someone who luvs ya and who recognizes individuality .... not sure I ever got as many positive review in a single eve as you have for this bit o cerebral stimulation and which I dig immensely :)

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks Nev this one is sort of a mantra for me lately!!! Hey did you see Crowley’s back my two old.. read more
Neville Pettitt

3 Weeks Ago

Great news indeed...I will give him a shout....
Unique style, message and poet. Rhythmic and cadence balanced with great introspection on life. A smile can win hearts and make friends while a frown can do the opposite. It is as you say to be reminded to smile albeit life's hardships, to take things in positive manners. Brilliant sir.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

Hey Sami:) I have a bit of a fractured memory oft need a reminder.
Sami Khalil

3 Weeks Ago

Whoa! You are welcome without fractions.
Smile! :)

Enjoyed the poem and what a clever title!

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

4 Weeks Ago

its infectious this smile thing I like it:)
I'm thinking about memories popping and crackling to life. Are they always good? Probably not. Yet what happens when they're all bad? Just a feeling I took away from this.

You have a unique style no one else on the site has. It forces you to think and that's not a bad thing.

Now whether my interpretation is right or not, that's a different story. ha

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

4 Weeks Ago

what you see is always right sometimes what others see becomes my define for often when i write the .. read more
The alliteration here is just great! Deep inside you are worthy of love? Everyone is, my friend....everyone. You must remind yourself to smile....to remember the fun we had as children when the snap, crackle, pop was something to look forward to. As always, a pleasure to read you. Lydi**

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

4 Weeks Ago

O'lydia you always make me smile too
I too was taken to my snap, crackle and pop breakfast cereal, relished as a child when I first read your title Bunny. It is easy to get wrapped up in reflections and sorrow when you read poetry, stuff buried deep which rises to the surface when least expected. You have to keep smiling though. Whenever Bunny is about I smile. Says alot about you, this piece.

Chris

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Month Ago

i'm glad you see me Chris means the world to be understood these days

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Hello My Name is Robert Trakofler My nickname is Bad Bunny... I am the Bunny but the bunny isn't me long live the bunny I own an art gallery and performance space in Pittsburgh called The Zeni.. more..

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