Obbligato Ostinato

Obbligato Ostinato

A Poem by Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

Obbligato Ostinato

 

Harmonic relations reside

Phrase sounds intonations preside

Notes locutions location stride

I sing sentient sentences

Sentient sentences sway sigh

 

Harmony expressions rely

Denote word positions imply

Placing definition descry

 In composing proposition

Propositioning your compose

 

Majestic melody marks masses

Masses mark melody majestic

Marks majestic masses melody

Melody majestic masses marks



© 2019 Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)


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cleverly musical write. makes one want to hum along. creative choice & arrangement of words to make a melody. the word repetition is pleasing to the ear. nice sheet music. where do i get tickets for the concerto? ... :)

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Weeks Ago

thanks Pete, The spectacular shows singing specters strayed support stopping spectacle.... sorry
Pete

2 Weeks Ago

someone shut the man off ... :)
Musical words. This poem is music to my ears Bunny. Majestic is a wonderful word and I have used it myself in a draft poem this week. Your last stanza of mass alliteration is joyous in its varied orders. That's what writers do jingle around with the words and listen to the sounds to get it just right. Great composing.

Chris

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Weeks Ago

Morning Chris:) I can never get enough joy out of words sounds and relations it tantalizes me to no .. read more
merci monsieur-Marvelous, melody, mingles,

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

Merci Mon Chérrie pour ton compliment et ma compréhension:)
Cherrie Palmer

3 Weeks Ago

mon Plaisir monsieur le poete
Your writing is like music!!! The rhyming the pace and the tone all like a symphony! Wonderfully staccato with big name articulation. I loved it!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

thanks Crowley... it is so nice to see you back:) my friend

Okay.. so its not all about da bass, is it Bun... ya gotta have a catchy rhythm and a decent lead rift or two
.. Ya also gotta mix appropriately and stir continuously.. then repeat precisely as it says on da menu and serve immediately without leaving to stand... Bingo, encore, applause.. Bow and exit stage .... I think this is the only way forward... Bravo, Bad B Robert sire...... :)

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

he he... hmm, a poem about word waves and food now that a challenge:) Thanks Nev
Neville Pettitt

3 Weeks Ago

Bring it on....
i could just imagine, bunny that your very first words as a baby came out in alliteration and word play.
You are the master...and so entertaining...
and yes, you could seem to write such clever songs...
j.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

hmm I will have to ask mom.... but i do remember her telling me a I used to talk to walls:)
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

this review still make me laugh
Bolt the door, Bunny, the jazz police are out and about.
Your alliterations shine sincerely silenced sentences...the playfulness of the last verse is great.
Its very melodic...Chet Baker perhaps...

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

I once tried to write a song that started out...
muses moving music
It didn't work out.. read more
As always your unique writing never ceases to amaze as you play with words and phrases. Love the tongue twister of a final stanza, very innovative sir!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

thanks John.... thought you might like this one

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Added on July 30, 2019
Last Updated on July 31, 2019
Tags: words, notes, tone, relation, harmony, harmonic, locution, melody, conveyance, compose, composition

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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

pittsburgh, PA



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Hello My Name is Robert Trakofler My nickname is Bad Bunny... I am the Bunny but the bunny isn't me long live the bunny I own an art gallery and performance space in Pittsburgh called The Zeni.. more..

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