Your heart is unveiled in this poem, bunny. And yet mysterious, like you always do. I was reading this jewel pretending I can't decode the language, just to feel the serene cadence of the words, so harmonious like the little waves on a quiet lake. What an abundance in your soul. Thank you for sharing that with us.
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
thank you so much Shandra sun smile, that makes me happy:) that picture is my face reflected on a pu.. read morethank you so much Shandra sun smile, that makes me happy:) that picture is my face reflected on a puddle in front of my house right after a storm thought it would be fitting
1 Year Ago
I forgot to mention the picture. I love it. There is so much longing in your eyes. For a dream that .. read moreI forgot to mention the picture. I love it. There is so much longing in your eyes. For a dream that caught you off guard.
Beautiful! This deserves to be put with all of the best love poems that have ever been written!
Posted 3 Months Ago
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3 Months Ago
Wow Thank you LA I don't know how I forgot about this poem I was cleaning up some of my old writes a.. read moreWow Thank you LA I don't know how I forgot about this poem I was cleaning up some of my old writes and I rediscovered it:) I am flattered by your review!
”To hold her.. hand in mine..cradle fold..band entwine..to drink her”- yes, this is heart-speak at its finest Robert. The ardor, the longing, the you-ness of this poem surrounds us and holds us enthralled “in outstretched bastion arms”. Bear and Bunny, we hear your exquisitely eloquent words, we see your mystical reflection, we feel your soul emerge...This is MasterClass poetry, unparalleled. Bowing now to the Poet unbound...
I can definitely think of worse ways to wake up. Cannot decide, however, whether the description is of a vision, a memory or the remnants of a dream. Whatever, it is very moving.
PS: I can't find a definition for "Revelelation."
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
he he I made it up... sometimes the dictionary needs to catch up to my mind:) Thanks John
An intense and so impacting poem with wonderful lines to quote. You deserve praise where you set the words ablaze. You cradle the dreams of yesteryear to make them reality of the future. Keep the revelations coming...
' Sunrise streaks ablaze - thoughts to his smile charm - longing kind eyes praise - her view in disarm -
a tear gives display - sky mirrors a storm.. '
And thereby hangs an epic first, third..and more chapter, Robert.
This is the you hiding behind a velvet gold-coloured curtain... literally rapt in happy anticipation.. waiting to take off into the sweet sighing unknown. This is bunny even finer than before. Your photo speaks a chapter of its own!
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
Gram-mercy's grateful gripping gasp:)
1 Year Ago
I read between lines.. sometimes.. Happy September, my friend. Tarrah.
1 Year Ago
you read between besides inside below and betwixt and perhaps even backwards!
I did belong to a gymnastics club a lifetime ago - hence my agility. Sadly, it didn't reach my bra.. read moreI did belong to a gymnastics club a lifetime ago - hence my agility. Sadly, it didn't reach my brain!
1 Year Ago
Think this review stuck, thank goodness.. so sorry if I missed a few, never intentional.
1 Year Ago
Not at all you always brighten my day when you do:)
You remember dear Robert, when I always tell You how gentle and sensitive You are and Your emotions are? I've waited to read something like THIS from You, when that very dear part of You is unfolding and flowing like the free wind, the poem itself is also brilliant from the title to the chosen words, the font and Your photo, of course Your last verse is sublime, I have no doubts to say that this poem is my most favorite from You from those ones I've read, for me absolutely 100l/00!
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
in your grace my words cannot express my gratitude dear light sometimes the dictionary doesn't have .. read morein your grace my words cannot express my gratitude dear light sometimes the dictionary doesn't have the right words available
To revel in another's soul...
to long for the dream once more...
Looking through a prism of colors spent
where falling stars gather in a cloud of
rain and sun drops where breaths cease to be...
truly, Pat
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
this may be the prettiest review i have ever gotten:)
1 Year Ago
dearest bunny... perhaps when we cease to breath,
there will be the prettiest view we have e.. read moredearest bunny... perhaps when we cease to breath,
there will be the prettiest view we have ever seen...
thank you for comprehending my feelings. truly, Pat
I sense such a deep longing and intense yearning within.
your lines..a heartfelt revelation/write of hidden emotions surfacing...the last lines so touching ..so tenderly expressed...
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
thank you so much Fran... it was a hard one to wrestle out of me but the last grouping was like a bu.. read morethank you so much Fran... it was a hard one to wrestle out of me but the last grouping was like a bullet:)
1 Year Ago
Well it's a beautifully written piece ..great picture also..you're welcome Robert..
To a slow beat your Revelation could become a sweet melodic song of amour, Roberto. Going to bring lovelorn followers in million. The longing always awakens at dawn and follows like pursuer never letting solace... and come tomorrow the ardor there once more! An incurable saudade. ( a coisa mais dolorosa que existe na vida!) .
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
so very true Mrudula it hurts like daggers, the wound never really heals. and still we crave for the.. read moreso very true Mrudula it hurts like daggers, the wound never really heals. and still we crave for the stabbing
"her view in disarm
a tear gives display,
sky mirrors a storm"
I just about fell out of my chair while reading this my friend. I placed a comma there intentionally after display, but not to change the meaning. "use a comma after a introductory transition" is my way of sorting out
the trussed, covered frame of my own thinking, not yours my friend. It's like being in love, you intentionally omit the characteristics you hate, like that acne on her back or the way you might slurp the coffee from the saucer. Poetry doesn't get any more heartfelt this this …...dana
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
well Dana if its any consolation... I just fasten my seat-belt when I read you now:) thank you so mu.. read morewell Dana if its any consolation... I just fasten my seat-belt when I read you now:) thank you so much for such kind words
I am the Bunny
but the bunny isn't me
long live the bunny
Hello I’m Robert I own an art gallery and performance space in Pittsburgh called The Zenith It is also an antique store and a veget.. more..