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A Poem by Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

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By all accounts

the specific gravity

Of my holdings amount

Leaves a cavity



© 2019 Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)


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When I first spied the title I thought music or drugs... Nah da Bunny dont do anything stronger than the soporific juice in his lettuce these days and his music license needs renewal.. therefore..

Sounds like my bloomin dentist... and will probably cost you an awful lot less.. and damn it you still gonna have a better smile.. now aint that the tooth..

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Weeks Ago

As I was sitting at the deli in the local produce yards I read this review and spit out my clam chow.. read more
Neville

2 Weeks Ago


if it were not for my Bell's Palsy I could wolf down a bowl of clam chowder right now... at .. read more
Neville

2 Weeks Ago

the Bell's Palsy was just me kidding.. not very funny, so I apologise to anyone in advance thus affl.. read more



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dear Bunny... how many "carrots" Karets are you missing...
Gold is better to hide in your home than to leave at your
Bank (withholding) beholding that it disappeared.
I never knew I would be a financial wizard. I trust the
cavity was filled with Gold ... your smile is worth a fortune.
truly, Pat

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Weeks Ago

Yes, Bunny< false teeth are window dressing...
Gumming your food is possible, however, it is.. read more
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Weeks Ago

good heavens i love the way you think:)
Patricia Wedel

2 Weeks Ago

Heaven can be on Earth... but so can Hell. Did I hear a Bell... or am Iaging... no time to lose my .. read more
That sensation is a punctuation mark between two winks, Robert.
Seems like peace of mind, Stillness of ocean. I wonder if it is permanent?
Just to test my bequest, I rasp nostalgia....alluvion of speculation anew.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Weeks Ago

he he you see both sides of my hands:) notice I'm not wearing sleeves... a billow will come and tell.. read more
Mrudula Rani

2 Weeks Ago

Those hands of yours look gorgeous, strong and yet extremely gentle!
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Weeks Ago

blushing bunny:) thank you... language queen
Lack of money, friends, relationships, pets, flowers in our garden, weekends out...you name it. But being able to sit and laugh about some of it is like letting out steam from a locomotive train I guess. Life needs some humor somewhere.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Weeks Ago

Yes:) yes yes!! LOL

When I first spied the title I thought music or drugs... Nah da Bunny dont do anything stronger than the soporific juice in his lettuce these days and his music license needs renewal.. therefore..

Sounds like my bloomin dentist... and will probably cost you an awful lot less.. and damn it you still gonna have a better smile.. now aint that the tooth..

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Weeks Ago

As I was sitting at the deli in the local produce yards I read this review and spit out my clam chow.. read more
Neville

2 Weeks Ago


if it were not for my Bell's Palsy I could wolf down a bowl of clam chowder right now... at .. read more
Neville

2 Weeks Ago

the Bell's Palsy was just me kidding.. not very funny, so I apologise to anyone in advance thus affl.. read more
bankrupt and bereft, and still snuck in a poem, you tease,

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Weeks Ago

A tiny one eked out:/;)
I always feel nervous about being the first one to comment on a poem. I don't know why. It is a bit like facing the empty page when first sitting down to write. That's kind of what your photo reminded me of, too. The empty hole/space/of the yet unwritten poem...or what have you.

But, of course, we're talking the more prosaic emptiness that we can all relate to from time to time, ha. The empty pockets, empty hands searching for change in couch cushions. When I have had to face questions of my net worth, I've cringed. The idea itself is belittling for those of us who inherit nothing, but when quizzed about it, the 00 of that bottom line is like two of those emoji eyes looking back at you in disbelief.

I think it's the modern American reality for a lot of people. Worldwide reality, really. The meaning (value) of us originates in much more lasting places, I reckon. Which I know, you know.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Weeks Ago

Bless you:) I know truly what’s real value but even sometimes I get that wrong too:/ and as you do.. read more
Eilis

2 Weeks Ago

I think it is part of the process. And also think if we felt satisfied we wouldn’t have the incent.. read more

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Added on September 6, 2019
Last Updated on September 6, 2019
Tags: money, humanity, value, love, matter, importance, bunny, humor, double meanings

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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

pittsburgh, PA



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Hello My Name is Robert Trakofler My nickname is Bad Bunny... I am the Bunny but the bunny isn't me long live the bunny I own an art gallery and performance space in Pittsburgh called The Zeni.. more..

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