Inrapture

Inrapture

A Poem by Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

__Inrapture__

 

As per your advertisement

I should like to

vault upon the firmament

Please forgive my

confounded impertinence

Instructions lost

moving In determinant

Eternal bliss

in this state impermanent

Permeates my

devote crave in consciousness

Delineate

proclivities providence

I obsecrate

clarity of cognizance


your consonance

© 2019 Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)


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Well… I consider myself to have an extensive vocabulary. I still had to look up "obsecrate." I love playing with words. Maybe I'll have to write something using this new-to-me word when the Pandora contest is over, and my headspace isn't taken up with warping nursery rhymes into even more twisted poetry.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Week Ago

Oh How I love that word... obsecrate it has a solemn intensity to it please tell me when you have do.. read more
MomzillaNC

1 Week Ago

IF… If I do it, I will make every effort to remember to let you know.



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Your words lead to a clarity of cognizance Robert - I think - but don't ask me too many questions. Your poem is a romp through the dictionary but it works somehow.
I like the tongue in humour mouth of it.
Well done.
Alan

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

4 Days Ago

he he thanks Alan, I'm still awaiting further instructions LOL if i get any i will throw them your w.. read more
Obsecrate gave me chills. It’s a churchy word, very like the formality of communion but also this intense personal connection. Reaching for one at least.

The mystery of life is what keeps me going. My children say I should try to write stories based on my dreams because they are so crazy I would be sure to become the best-selling author my husband would like me to be so he can retire, ha ha.

But, I can’t get those elusive visions and ideas down on paper. They seem to belong only in that space. Your poem made me think of that. How many things I don’t understand and how I’m not really sure I want to understand them. A thoughtful poem.

As ever. Good stuff here, Robert.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Week Ago

if ever i was to have written a poem about my mindset this would be it Eilis it does not surprise me.. read more
Well… I consider myself to have an extensive vocabulary. I still had to look up "obsecrate." I love playing with words. Maybe I'll have to write something using this new-to-me word when the Pandora contest is over, and my headspace isn't taken up with warping nursery rhymes into even more twisted poetry.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Week Ago

Oh How I love that word... obsecrate it has a solemn intensity to it please tell me when you have do.. read more
MomzillaNC

1 Week Ago

IF… If I do it, I will make every effort to remember to let you know.
All righty then. I'll need to look some things up and read it again.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Week Ago

Oh goodness I did it again...LOL... Bad Bunny!!!! Note to self never start a poem with the word adv.. read more
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Gee
Well Robert, that well and truly sailed straight over the top of my head and in doing so made me feel a tad more dumber than I already am :))

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Weeks Ago

Oh my god I’m laughing my ears off:) it is a bit over the top isn’t it? oh my, it’s a sort of .. read more
love this, bunny....and i say, the hell with instructions....might be a harder, longer journey but if we can figure things out on our own...we feel more accomplishment...that's life.
j.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Weeks Ago

thanks Jacob, He he I was having serious focus issues and I read Gee’s poem Reverend Johny this mo.. read more

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Added on September 8, 2019
Last Updated on September 9, 2019
Tags: enlightenment, understanding, heaven, nirvana, love, direction, hope, aspire, desire, clarity

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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

pittsburgh, PA



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Hello My Name is Robert Trakofler My nickname is Bad Bunny... I am the Bunny but the bunny isn't me long live the bunny I own an art gallery and performance space in Pittsburgh called The Zeni.. more..

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